|Reviews for Shades of Innocence|
| drowningsun chapter 19 . 2/28
OH MY GOD I LOVE THIS SO MUCH! Aaaaaagh, I cried like a billion times though. XD This is in all seriousness one of the top five APH fics I've ever read. I love it, it's absolutely amazing.
| Ivory8 chapter 19 . 2/17
I love this so much! it is such a beautiful feelz train containing all my fave pairing!
Frachelles, UsUk, Spamano and of course GerIta!
I am so happy you exist and wrote this fanfic
| psYchOtIc Summoner chapter 19 . 2/16
Not sure if you're still looking for feedback on this, but I stayed up until 4 am reading this, and finished it when I woke up. This is by far the most suspenseful, tragic, yet beautiful GerIta fic I have ever read. Unless you've done it already, I really think this could be turned into a novel!
| Sky Veneziano chapter 19 . 1/28
T-this was beautiful! I loved it too much for words!
| Cheary chapter 19 . 1/19
There are no words to describe how awesomely Prussian this fic is. None. *steals all Awards and gives it to you* You deserve it.
| Angel Connoisseur chapter 19 . 12/21/2013
I loved this fic so much that I finished it within two days! (I stayed up till like 5 am to end at chapter 11 then woke up at 2 pm and continued reading right away to be finished about 2 hours later! can't believe it's almost 5 already hehe) I adored this story and i'm very glad I found it. The story, as others have said, is very professional sounding and extremely well written. There are only a few errors i've found while reading, nothing serious (like not using commas to show that a character is addressing another in their sentences ie: "what are you doing, Ludwig?" but that's fine, nothing unfixable. The other thing was with the stab wound that italy received, it might've taken a lot more days for recovery (room to add sweet fluff of germany trying to visit him hehe) because the stitches can open up and cause bleeding (that so would've happened during that raw sex haahaa) Aside from the small errors and slight inaccuracy of the wounds, you're fine. Also, I was almost convinced that italy was going to work at the prison as a chef so he could be with him! Nice plot twist btw pfft. I wasn't planning of writing a review until I finished so here you go! I'm new to reviewing so I hope it's okay! Thank you for taking the time to finish this (and not abandon it like you mentioned) even when your life is busy and hectic! Your boyfriend is a very luck greecey man hehe!
| ramen-senpai chapter 2 . 12/19/2013
Love the fanfic.
| Lifeclaw chapter 19 . 12/18/2013
That was beautiful, thank you so much. If you ever do publish a book like this one, I'll be sure to buy it!
| Stella laLuna chapter 19 . 12/9/2013
I LOVE THIS FIC OMAFGAWD.
IT'S SO GOOD AHHH*gives awards* I love it, it's a favourite, and you've given me release for my secret wish of gerita Prison AU! Love ya!
| GHRS chapter 19 . 12/3/2013
This was really nice. I was glad they got a happy ending.
| Guest chapter 19 . 12/1/2013
You so should make this a book! It was amazing! I don't think I've ever readed anything so amazon! But then again i hate reading...but somehow you should me the joys of it :) my sister introduced me to it and i fell in love and kept reading non-stop for days! If you do ever publish this make a little bonus chapter that says what the book is called and when it will be published :) just want you to know you have a great talent.
| marshy-chan chapter 14 . 11/10/2013
While reading this, I realized how unfair and ironic Ludwig's position is in all of this.
People are in war, and they don't get put in jail for killing the enemy. But when someone like Ludwig does it...
... I just realized how much life sucks ;-;
| gerita00 chapter 19 . 11/5/2013
I loved this story so much! It made me cry so much and I loved the ending!
| princessofd chapter 19 . 11/3/2013
This is beautiful!
| SoulEaterRomanceFan chapter 19 . 10/19/2013
Squishy ( owo ) Is my describing word for the story. Haha Read this whole thing in one sitting, I did. xD Totally worth the loss of sleep.
I loved how realistic you've made things. Their characters were spot-on and that scene with Gilbert was heartbreaking. :C The little problems here and there. The well-paced building of their relationship, then the conflicts and troubles, eventually leading to drastic measures that worked out in the end. Very well done!
Such emotions though! You've really captured them. It's heartbreaking to read about Ludwig and Feliciano's separation. The loss of Ludwig's brother Gilbert. Even the turmoil that Lovino endured as he spent all that time worrying about his younger sibling. I especially liked how we even got to see the our guards, Alfred and Arthur, and how this event really affected them and their relationship too. Even times with Elizabeta were a welcome change. Smaller characters like Francis and Kiku played their part and even the original characters added wonderful depth to the already rich story A nicely balanced plot, yep yep.
So, time to favourite this and search for another wonderful story like this! A pat on the back to you for this gem and keep up the great work! Good job!