Reviews for Innocent Betrayal
pot420 chapter 4 . 1/1/2015
MORE MORE MORE MORE MOE'S i really enjoy DarkAllen:)
TOOLAZYTOLOGIN chapter 4 . 1/19/2014
More chapters please! Dont just leave this at bay!
Dark Domination chapter 4 . 8/2/2013
Overall decent start and the only real problems I had was the lack of detail that you put into each of the scenes and that you never went into and real detail with any of the fight scenes other than Allen's and Tyki's and only put the beginning and end results of each fight, though it's understandable if you're not good at writing fight scenes but adding detail would help improve what you already have. The spelling was pretty good as was the grammar and the overall flow of the fic was pretty good as well. I'll be following this and see how things turn out.
Fan chapter 4 . 7/12/2013
This is a great story; make more of it! Update please!
Semper Tardius chapter 4 . 6/20/2013
Certainly a great start to your story. I always wondered what it would be like if the Noah woke up on the Ark and have often fantasized about the different scenarios :D
Lilaya chapter 4 . 4/28/2013
OMG A CLIFFHANGER!
Lilaya chapter 3 . 4/28/2013
NEAH!
Lilaya chapter 2 . 4/28/2013
I agree. Rhode/Road (however you want to spell it) needs to kiss Allen more! That chapter in D. Gray-Man was so funny!
Mukuro234 chapter 4 . 4/12/2013
I love this yay
Rachel-chan XOXOX chapter 4 . 3/28/2013
I. Love. This. Update soon!
SakuraKoi chapter 4 . 3/18/2013
Allen your back!
SakuraKoi chapter 3 . 3/18/2013
14th...
SakuraKoi chapter 2 . 3/18/2013
Allen is AWAKE!
SakuraKoi chapter 1 . 3/18/2013
no sugar high for Kanda Yuu.
KhaalidaNyx chapter 4 . 2/22/2013
*sniffs* Its so short! But-hey! You didn't forget about us! That's always a plus. Thanks for the update!
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