Reviews for Coincidence or Fate
On the Hill chapter 3 . 6/3/2014
I'm a late comer, but so far Bella seems to think that everyone is rude and makes assumptions because they're "popular", when in fact, she's the only one who seems to be doing it. I know I'm only on chapter 3, but nobody's been as rude as she has. The only other two characters that have been introduced have been pretty well mannered. Personally I think people are only popular because others put them on the pedestal while thinking less of themselves. If she had a better self image she wouldn't be such a bitch. No one will ever make friends that way.
Guest chapter 10 . 4/26/2014
Uh...

I do remember that Bella 'was going to flirt with some guys' and frequently wakes up on a random strangers bed, meaning of course they had sex...

Which involves kissing nein?

So how the hell did she just recieve her first kiss?

Correct me if i'm wrong but I'M SURE this Bella is a whore
Guest chapter 3 . 4/25/2014
This bella is very annoying
Zelda's Hero chapter 24 . 4/8/2014
Looking forward to the next chapter.
thiree chapter 24 . 3/23/2014
Great chapter I can't wait to c wat happens nxt :)
A2463 chapter 24 . 3/18/2014
Love it! Really love it! Please continue!
lynettecullen chapter 24 . 3/17/2014
Well...I'm glad that Bella let it out.
Jay aka Jordan chapter 24 . 3/17/2014
Poor Bella
MADDY22 chapter 24 . 3/17/2014
Worth the wait update when y can
Naruto20Akemi20 chapter 23 . 2/21/2014
This story is really interesting and i would like to read more.
thiree chapter 23 . 2/13/2014
Great chapter I can't wait to c wat happens nxt :) I hope bella opens up to rose nd rose gets a little more insight on bellas past nd I wonder wat her mother did to her or with her at the beach tht her father couldn't hear
GryphonLu chapter 23 . 2/11/2014
Maybe you could put inner thoughts in italics or something too, to help with the confusion. I do like the story but it's hard to enjoy reading something that has so many grammatical errors like her instead of here, or quotations on thoughts and what is being said out loud.
GryphonLu chapter 22 . 2/11/2014
Maybe you could spell check a bit more? You keep using her instead of here and leaving letters off other words and it kind of makes a lot of the story look weird.
Jay aka Jordan chapter 23 . 2/9/2014
I'm ready for the truth!
shakalaka7 chapter 23 . 2/9/2014
awwn! your fic has always been sweet, i have been following since the start i hope we can learn a bit more from Bella on the next one! thanks!
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