Reviews for Moving Out
HarnGin chapter 1 . 8/7/2012
Your story has promise. If you would clean up the grammar-especially the subject-verb agreement problems, it might even be worth a second read.
dris chapter 2 . 8/7/2012
Did not see that coming Severus is a liar lol
Ellieandra chapter 2 . 8/7/2012
... and that was my attempt at smilling starry eyed...

marksmom chapter 2 . 8/7/2012
Loved this chapter! Harry's pain was so real, you could almost feel it! I loved the epilogue...loved watching their baby take her first steps and hearing about another one on the way! Kudos, My Dear!
marksmom chapter 1 . 8/7/2012
Loved this! Sorry I didn't review it when I got it yesterday, but I got busy and completely forgot until I saw it still sitting in my inbox, waiting for my review. I really do love your stories, My Dear! Kudos and off to read #2!
Lientjuhh chapter 2 . 8/7/2012
nice ending... Nice out of the closet.. :D I like it.. well done.. :D
fairyprincess91 chapter 1 . 8/6/2012
looking forward to more
917brat chapter 1 . 8/6/2012
I am really curious as to who it is please keep it up.
Penelope Snape chapter 1 . 8/6/2012
love it so far. am assuming it will be severus... anyway hoping it will be
Seraphinus chapter 1 . 8/6/2012
I'm looking forward to finding out who it is. Till later.
dris chapter 1 . 8/6/2012
I'm curious I was hoping it was Ron but obvioously not :(
Cathcer1984 chapter 1 . 8/6/2012
Oooo I wonder who Harry's with?
Madame de Coeur chapter 1 . 8/6/2012
No no no no no no! Evil! Why would you do that! :(( Update soon!
Guest chapter 1 . 8/6/2012
hmmm... I have a little voice in my head saying its severus...
but another one saying that its not...

hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm... older... I am intrigued...
MyOTPIsKillingMe chapter 1 . 8/6/2012
Who is Harry boyfriend?aaarrrggggghhhh the question will leave me restless and please any hint?
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