Reviews for Harrison Potter Stephens |
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![]() ![]() ![]() "And yet you left my grandson alone, on a chilly November night on a doorstep without so much as ringing the bell. If that is how you treat the orphaned child of dear friends, then I shudder to think how you treat the children of mere acquaintances." dmubles and snape deserve azkaban and nothing less and for harry to NEVER EVER go to hogwarts again |
![]() ![]() ![]() I've been looking for a decent HP/Bewitched crossover for a while. Everything that looked promising was unfinished. This is exactly what I wanted to find. Sam's family are very in charscter. Endora, Maurice and Samantha and Harry.. preform intricate magic wandlessly and wordlessly. I got a kick over Maurice being Merlin and having a kid with Helga Hufflepuff! |
![]() ![]() ![]() good job second time reading it |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ahhh, just what I needed to finish the day. Clever writing, excellent dialogue, silly plot arcs treated with the appropriate silliness, and best of all, seamless integration between twinkling nosed immortals and the HP'verse. I think my favorite part was how simultaneously incredulous and dismissive everyone in the Stephens family was at how utterly back-arsewards the HP'verse was :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this. should do a longer one. |
![]() ![]() Thank you for the very interesting story, but I wished you gave a little more to it, I think that this was a |
![]() ![]() ![]() I wish you can continue this story. I reality liked it so far. Hermione is always a curious little bugger isn't she? |
![]() ![]() that was awesome! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lol love it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very entertaining. Brings back memories of the tv show and I can see it happening that way. Fun to read. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really liked this story. The cross over was an unexpected but enjoyed one. Like all greedy readers, I wished that it had gone on and on. I think that this is either the 3rd or 4th story of yours, and I have loved them all but wished they had gone on and on [I know...greedy reader.] HEHEHE Are you planning on expanding to multiple or staying with the short stories? You might try to write a short story with your own universe. It may be a challenge but if you make it work, you could try to go to multiple chapter stories and maybe try selling your work. Challenging, I know, think about it. SMILE! |
![]() ![]() ![]() TOO FUNNY! THANK YOU! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I also read that story, and it was completely entertaining, so when I saw that you had done one too, I had to read yours… I’m a fan of longer stories, but a decent one shot is a good distraction every now and then… |
![]() ![]() Generally lighthearted with a hilarious ending. Good read. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thank you, it was very entertaining. I also enjoyed reading the “Elder Sect” . |