Reviews for Harrison Potter Stephens
Incantations7 chapter 1 . 11/22
I do love a good crossover with the Elder Ones…
dianaanne chapter 1 . 9/9
Good one!
Guest chapter 1 . 8/22
Lovely!
RubinCompServ chapter 1 . 7/15
While I liked this story, I was all set to call you out for so obviously copying the Elder Sect until I got to your note at the end. You're an honorable man and take 10 points for your House.
Jet Black01 chapter 1 . 5/28
I thought this story followed Harry potter and the elder sect a bit to suspiciously close... but i still enjoyed it and am happy of the fact that i have found another story where Harry gas bewitched magic. That is by far the best magic out of the 2.
Wyrmridr chapter 1 . 4/24
Love the ending. Perfect way to get rid of a dark lord.

Thanks for writing!

-J
Silverdragonstar chapter 1 . 3/12
This was great, I love the ending of Voldy.
l4w chapter 1 . 12/10/2023
I wonder how long Tommy is going to live
Thanks for sharing your story
Marie chapter 1 . 11/10/2023
Thank you for this delightful tale!
Jimbocous chapter 1 . 11/11/2023
Thanks! Nice one.
Rys chapter 1 . 8/12/2023
Amazing story! Thank you so much.
AliceTobor chapter 1 . 7/27/2023
I really, Really, REALLY hate that Rowling made Harry an orphan!

Nowhere in the prophecy does it require the Potters to die.

They were set up to die by Dumbledore.

The proof is in the books.

First they are sent into hiding with a spell that lets a traitor easily betray them.
Second Dumbledore reads minds, he had to know Peter Pettigrew was a traitor.
Third the light was losing badly, Dumbledore needed the prophecy immediately.
Fourth somehow Dumbledore talked James into loaning him The Cloak Of Invisibility.
IF THEY HAD THE CLOAK OF INVISIBILITY THEN LILY AND HARRY COULD HAVE HIDDEN AND ESCAPED!
Why would James and Lily let Dumbledore have the best defense?

Rowling wrote it, she may not have meant it but what is written is WRITTEN.

Someone write a story where Lily ACTS like a genius, she is supposed to be smart but doesn't act smart.

Oh and Lily is a witch like Samantha but doesn't know it...

Dumbledore for his treatment of Harry should be turned into a tiny mouse then given to a playful cat.

We want him to SUFFER, Dumbledore doesn't deserve a quick death.

He KNEW Harry would not be treated well by the Dursleys.

I DESPISE Dumbledore, and Rowling is revolting.
carla anderson chapter 1 . 6/9/2023
Oh this was a wonderful story. Thank you so much for sharing it with us.
Diddleymaz chapter 1 . 6/6/2023
Clever and entertaining xx
Mando-Vet chapter 1 . 5/7/2023
Very good story.
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