|Reviews for Harrison Potter Stephens|
| yochan123 chapter 1 . 4/13
"And yet you left my grandson alone, on a chilly November night on a doorstep without so much as ringing the bell. If that is how you treat the orphaned child of dear friends, then I shudder to think how you treat the children of mere acquaintances."
dmubles and snape deserve azkaban and nothing less
and for harry to NEVER EVER go to hogwarts again
| SherlockWholmes chapter 1 . 3/31
I've been looking for a decent HP/Bewitched crossover for a while. Everything that looked promising was unfinished. This is exactly what I wanted to find. Sam's family are very in charscter. Endora, Maurice and Samantha and Harry.. preform intricate magic wandlessly and wordlessly. I got a kick over Maurice being Merlin and having a kid with Helga Hufflepuff!
| hbeazer chapter 1 . 3/23
good job second time reading it
| Majerus chapter 1 . 3/22
Ahhh, just what I needed to finish the day. Clever writing, excellent dialogue, silly plot arcs treated with the appropriate silliness, and best of all, seamless integration between twinkling nosed immortals and the HP'verse.
I think my favorite part was how simultaneously incredulous and dismissive everyone in the Stephens family was at how utterly back-arsewards the HP'verse was :D
| Shay Shadowhunter chapter 1 . 2/26
I love this. should do a longer one.
| Cindy Reilly chapter 1 . 2/9
Thank you for the very interesting story, but I wished you gave a little more to it, I think that this was a
| AkiraNatsume chapter 1 . 1/21
I wish you can continue this story. I reality liked it so far. Hermione is always a curious little bugger isn't she?
| Brad chapter 1 . 12/30/2021
that was awesome!
| Wolvie26 chapter 1 . 10/26/2021
Lol love it!
| Clark959 chapter 1 . 10/16/2021
Very entertaining. Brings back memories of the tv show and I can see it happening that way. Fun to read.
| ruth hammond chapter 1 . 9/17/2021
I really liked this story. The cross over was an unexpected but enjoyed one. Like all greedy readers, I wished that it had gone on and on. I think that this is either the 3rd or 4th story of yours, and I have loved them all but wished they had gone on and on [I know...greedy reader.] HEHEHE Are you planning on expanding to multiple or staying with the short stories? You might try to write a short story with your own universe. It may be a challenge but if you make it work, you could try to go to multiple chapter stories and maybe try selling your work. Challenging, I know, think about it. SMILE!
| Kittens Kat chapter 1 . 9/13/2021
TOO FUNNY! THANK YOU!
| Incantations7 chapter 1 . 8/26/2021
I also read that story, and it was completely entertaining, so when I saw that you had done one too, I had to read yours…
I’m a fan of longer stories, but a decent one shot is a good distraction every now and then…
| S chapter 1 . 8/13/2021
Generally lighthearted with a hilarious ending. Good read.
| notyourpapa chapter 1 . 8/5/2021
Thank you, it was very entertaining.
I also enjoyed reading the “Elder Sect” .