| Reviews for OPERATION: Break the Dawn |
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   hohi.rose chapter 5 . 9/30 i loath it when writers paint the middle east as just dry deserts... i dare you come to northern iran that you mentioned in your fic it's all green forests not to say we don't have deserts but it's all or nothing with u guys no? we are much more technologically advanced, civilized, hospitable, rich in culture and history than you could ever imagine. it's also laughable to me when Americans and Europeans see the Arab countries and Iran as the destabilizing entity that is terrorising the world, when in fact they are just resisting decades of oppression and occupation that America, occupied Palestine or what genocidelovers like to call Israel , not great Britain, France, Germany are enforcing... if you open your eyes you'll clearly see who is the occupier, aggressor, oppressor and who is resisting and defending itself... who starts wars? who is killing innocent women and children in the name of self-defense? who is committing an outright genocide and ethnic cleansing? not convincing for you? let me ask this then does Iran have militarily Bases in any country but itself? does any Arab country? why does America and France and some other countries have so many military bases scattered all over the middle east? what was the point of the Iraq war? did they have the chem weapons? no it turned out to be a lie. all those American soldiers died for nothing killing so many for nothing, defending a lie. did the war in Afghanistan solve anything? do more research. find unbiased resources. it's all out there. |
| grapesiii chapter 4 . 9/13 Woah! |
| grapesiii chapter 3 . 9/13 Wow |
| GUEST chapter 26 . 7/5 Love this story except the ending. I don't like that Bella is part of their team now. It just seems convenient. Plus its supposed to be super elite team and they get someone who's not trained for it? It just doesn't make sense. It just ruined the story for me. But thanks for writing this, i did enjoy it! |
| Lizcarpenter1956 chapter 1 . 6/27 Absolutely love this story I love your Edward and the rest of the characters ️ you are a brilliant author much more talented than SM |
| 1717user chapter 27 . 5/19 Just found this and binged. Loved it so so much! Cant wait to read the sequel. Yiu are such a talented writer. Thank you for sharing! |
| Dinkyp chapter 27 . 5/12 Just re read this for the multiple time. I still love it. One of my absolute favourites. Cant find anything like it. Cant wait for the Operation Light the Fires to be complete. (Im too impatient for a wip. |
| supergirl1313 chapter 26 . 4/12 Stumbled upon this beauty a few days back and absolutely devoured it! Finished up yesterday but I can't stop thinking about it. This is so well written and fully absorbing. You are really gifted. Thank you for sharing this masterpiece with us ! |
| Rue1921 chapter 27 . 4/9 This was quite an interesting read. It stretched my imagination and showed a bad ass team. Loved the story can't wait to read the sequel! Great job! |
| NKubie chapter 27 . 3/31 Woooo hooooo! I'm excited and it looks like I have some chapters to catch up on. I'm a little nervous about cliffhangers, though. That's the risk of reading a WIP. But I may just take that risk. :) I do have a question, though: Bella aside (it would be a given) do you think the charcters of The Cleaner could kick the asses of their OBtD counterparts? Not easily, of course, but maybe? Or are they equally matched? What are your thoughts, Kate? I'd love to know! Stay safe and well! xo Nan P.S. I'm still not sure I have the guts to read the outtake. Maybe someday. |
| NKubie chapter 26 . 3/31 Woo hoo for fictional timelines! They certainly deserved those awards! And hell, this whole fandom started with vampires and werewolves, so we uf we can't suspend our disbelief for this, what kind of crappy readers are we?! Lol This has been such an exciting ride! I'm looking forward to the next! Stay safe and well! xo Nan |
| NKubie chapter 25 . 3/31 Bella's bored, huh? Well, there's a cure for that. Hopefully, she's a go, thanks to fictional job opportunities...and healing for Edward. ;) . Stay safe and well! xo Nan |
| GorGirl chapter 19 . 3/31 Oh man! She fell right into it. Wasn't anyone watching that side? |
| GorGirl chapter 18 . 3/31 Glad Emmett seems okay! I guess she knows Edward's intentions now. |
| NKubie chapter 24 . 3/31 Their version of happily ever after is a little different than the rest of us. And I love that Edward isn't even trying to hide his relationship with Bella anymore. Actually, he didn't hide it that well before. LOL And the interaction between Edward and Rose is priceless! Stay safe and well! xo Nan |