This was a remarkable story! I’m so impressed with your writing, the background information and research that you have done to make sure that every part of the story felt authentic and realistic. Plus, the courage and sacrifice that the men and women in our military give to our country is often so undervalued so what a tremendous testament you have given to these unsung heroes. All your knowledge of general operations, weaponry, equipment, tactical, languages, planning and an interesting storyline precisely written and easy to understand made the entire story just perfect. Thank you for all your efforts

Thank you so much for sharing this fab story with us, I loved how incredibly brave you made my favourite characters. Also, I appreciate all your research and explanations.

Absolutely amazing! The best story I’ve read in ages, absolutely loved it!
So well researched.
I loved the use of Dayan as the surname. My middle name is Dayana after Moshe Dayan.
I look forward to reading your other work and hopefully any future takes from this story.

This is an amazing story. It made me wanting more. So sad no seque. Also, there are really no other stories out there like this I've looked. Thanks for sharing.

You are a wonderful story teller
It is so difficult to write action scenes and still have the reader invested in the story
Absolutely amazing!

Best Action I've read! So an entertainment. I enjoy this so badly that I wish for more and more

I was so excited when I saw this marked "complete". Such a great story. Suspenseful and scary but with marineward, just wow. Also loved kickass Bella. Thoroughly enjoyed it.

This is me requesting an OS where Edward meets Charlie Swan, Ranger. Wonder how the gun cleaning scene would go then. Lots of Army-Marines joshing.

OK, I'm excited for this! Let's gooooo

Would just like to say that I have loved every minute reading this story.
Kept me on the seat of my pants all the way.
Your knowledge of everything milatry is amazing.
(Non USA reader here)
Story was so exciting.
You said you wouldn't do a sequel, but honestly there is another story there for you to write.
Change it to an original fiction if you have to, but please let me know, as I would love to read more of this group, the Delta's & Israeli's.
Once again truly great job, well done

Uau
Choro,choro,choro
Isso foi incrível. Tem algum tempo que não maratonava uma história assim. A união da equipe, a ação das cenas, o cenário de guerra . Eu amei, obrigado por compartilhar.

have loved this story, thank you so much for sharing! x

I submerged myself in this fix for a week and just loved it! Brilliantly written. As I read, it was like I was actually there…it felt so real - your descriptions of each scene are so good. For a non-military person to be able to follow along with the story so easily is due to your exceptional skills.
I love how you write strong, intelligent women who are relatable. Bella is the missing piece to their team. I hadn’t seen it coming, but makes perfect sense. All these characters in Edward’s team are amazing, how they interact and work together. It takes a very special person who has a calling to this kind of life..I can see that now. Just to keep going when all seems lost….I have so much awe and respect. Through this story I have a much deeper understanding of the dedication and sacrifice made by the real people who undertake these missions. I feel so grateful for that.
Thank you for sharing!

Uau
Que capítulo. Estou apaixonada por sua escrita. Estou maratona suas histórias .

Pulled me in from beginning to end. Absolutely loved it! Would love more stories with your team of Marines and their scientist! Great job!