|Reviews for OPERATION: Break the Dawn|
| Pjszoo chapter 3 . 10/15
This is about the 4th time I've read this.. so good. And causing me to have memories of my days in the USAF. Fred... gotta love it! Thanks again Tink.
| musemum chapter 4 . 10/8
what a great description for the Captain "compelling"...
| musemum chapter 3 . 10/8
this story had me hooked from the start...I feel like I'm in the room with the characters... it conveys the feelingsthoughts so well... guess I'm missing out on sleep in the near future while I read!
| Janina14 chapter 19 . 9/3
Oh no. I hoped that this wouldn’t happen. hopefully the captain or El’azar notices real quick!
| kkbeau1 chapter 27 . 7/13
This entire story was amazing. I love your in depth knowledge of military procedure. It makea this fix so realistic. And I absolutely adore the way you make each character unique. Love this fic, I am definitely adding rhis to my favorites list.
| pumpkin595 chapter 26 . 7/2
I love this story! Can we please have an outtake of Bella’s ceremony?!
| Denij chapter 1 . 6/24
awesome, exciting intro.
| RedEyedBella chapter 27 . 6/8
Ever so often I come across absolute masterpieces on fanfic that should actually be published. This is one of them. Thank you so much for giving us this gift for free!
| bozbaby chapter 18 . 5/25
Heeey! Those chili mac MREs aren't bad! But yes, they (clears throat) *leave* in a rather *sensational* way. (Sorry, no italics in reviews to my knowledge.)
~ US Navy, Retired
| reader71360 chapter 1 . 5/20
Edward is doing the medical work in this chapter?
| GorGirl chapter 1 . 5/9
This looks interesting!
| LOLO 5-0 chapter 27 . 5/2
You make my dreams come true! I can't tell you how many times I have read an re-read OBTD. Thank you from the bottom of my heart!
| butterfingers11 chapter 26 . 4/25
Great story! I really like your writing and attention to detail and can’t wait to read the sequel
| beegurl13 chapter 26 . 4/22
Oh my goodness, I'm so glad I finally read this story. It's so good! Your characters are interesting, real, flawed, funny, and well-rounded, and that doesn't always happen in fanfic stories. The plotline is interesting, exciting, and realistic, which is one thing I really love in fanfic stories - being able to imagine myself in the story. Your attention to details is second to none - seriously. I LOVE it so much when details make the story even better than it already is, and yours do that. It's kinda crazy because the story is already SO good. The details just push it over the top, and I couldn't be happier about it.
Thank you for writing this and sharing it with us. :)
| beegurl13 chapter 25 . 4/22
I really, really love seeing these two happy and together. And I love seeing Edward's team the same way. Dang, girl. You've written such a wonderful story and such good characters. All the details just makes it that much better, which is crazy because this story and your writing is already so, SO good! :)