|Reviews for The Rise of Overlord Vulcan!|
| Saligia666 chapter 17 . 3/10
I think your storry is fucking awsome and I cant wait till the next chapter.
This remake is way better than the old.
In regard of jutsus I dont have a jutsu but a bloodline Harry cood use:
The EMS (Eternal Mangecyu Sharingan) dont know if spelled rigth
It could awaken with his dragonslayer powers ore because of an ritual that deals with improofed vision.
I think the Sharingan is right because the genjutsuability can power his mmind trick and Legimency and make them faster and easier to cast.
With the coppying abillity he can coppy wand movements and spells (but not wandless casts)
Tsucojomi could be an advanced mind tric lice the genjutsu used on th ejinchurriki of the sanbii to start the bloodline purge
Amaterasu can be a combination of fire and shadow manipulation (because of the bllack collor)
and Susanoo can be the higerst peaak of fire manipulation (solid flames) if jou use it at all
I wouldnt recomment KAmui because that would be too mutsch overkill
Wenever you use my Idea ore nor I would like to hear your oppinion and hope you have lots of fun writing your storrys.
| HarryHermioneEdwardBella chapter 1 . 2/26
| VoldLunaMione chapter 17 . 2/23
... Sorry for the shit review, I'm horrible at this
| What chapter 6 . 2/18
Good chapter, beside the lemon stuff (which i read /, having kids sucking each other job is something i don't wanna know).
I wonder when you gonna introduce more Overlord stuff... i miss the Gnarl perverted comments XD, it would be goldmine in this fan fic, until harry beat the living crap out of him ofcourse :P
| Xenter chapter 17 . 2/18
I think you adding too many branches of multiverse too quickly... it getting complicated. Bits and pieces of another story mixed in without details background to work on bad.
Also you should be writing erotica lol :O not fanfic.
| klimstit chapter 17 . 2/15
very good n detailed rewrite so far
when will u be updating the next chapter
| Guest chapter 12 . 2/14
Amaterasu jutsu and Susanoo would be a good start i think flaming armor and black fire seem to fit
| Kansashoopsjr chapter 4 . 2/8
Great story I am eager to see the story hopefully completed in the future.
| OP chapter 17 . 2/2
Please update soon
| KinZer0 chapter 2 . 2/2
Is the ice tiger a balance to harry's fire powers, do they cancel out, and can either lose control and hurt the otheR?
| YuukiAsuna-Chan chapter 12 . 2/2
nooo, as you have clearly shown before, HARRY DONT SHARE HIS GIRLS... what kind of dumb ass shares his damn harem? it just doesnt happen, also would be nice if you introduced Fleur and Gabrielle into his harem (assuming they are/will be added... they better) before the tri-wizard just so we get something a little different with them already knowing each other and so forth
| YuukiAsuna-Chan chapter 11 . 2/2
haha, that turned out quite well for Harry... so now he has 3 woman...
| YuukiAsuna-Chan chapter 9 . 2/2
not a bad chap
| YuukiAsuna-Chan chapter 8 . 2/1
nice chapter, though i think they are a bit to accepting of Ron... i mean the guy was a complete ass the whole 1st year and they just let him back into there group after he is semi nice for a couple of times, then have no suspicions of his erratic behavior
| YuukiAsuna-Chan chapter 6 . 2/1
lol, Gabby's plan was a partial success but i highly doubt that she will give up so easily... she seemed very set on giving her virginity to harry and i think she will succeed in her endeavor