Reviews for The Rise of Overlord Vulcan!
What chapter 6 . 2/18/2014
Good chapter, beside the lemon stuff (which i read /, having kids sucking each other job is something i don't wanna know).

I wonder when you gonna introduce more Overlord stuff... i miss the Gnarl perverted comments XD, it would be goldmine in this fan fic, until harry beat the living crap out of him ofcourse :P
Xenter chapter 17 . 2/18/2014
I think you adding too many branches of multiverse too quickly... it getting complicated. Bits and pieces of another story mixed in without details background to work on bad.

Also you should be writing erotica lol :O not fanfic.
klimstit chapter 17 . 2/15/2014
very good n detailed rewrite so far
when will u be updating the next chapter
Guest chapter 12 . 2/14/2014
Amaterasu jutsu and Susanoo would be a good start i think flaming armor and black fire seem to fit
Kansashoopsjr chapter 4 . 2/8/2014
Great story I am eager to see the story hopefully completed in the future.
OP chapter 17 . 2/2/2014

Please update soon
KinZer0 chapter 2 . 2/2/2014
Is the ice tiger a balance to harry's fire powers, do they cancel out, and can either lose control and hurt the otheR?
YuukiAsuna-Chan chapter 12 . 2/2/2014
nooo, as you have clearly shown before, HARRY DONT SHARE HIS GIRLS... what kind of dumb ass shares his damn harem? it just doesnt happen, also would be nice if you introduced Fleur and Gabrielle into his harem (assuming they are/will be added... they better) before the tri-wizard just so we get something a little different with them already knowing each other and so forth
YuukiAsuna-Chan chapter 11 . 2/2/2014
haha, that turned out quite well for Harry... so now he has 3 woman...
YuukiAsuna-Chan chapter 9 . 2/2/2014
not a bad chap
YuukiAsuna-Chan chapter 8 . 2/1/2014
nice chapter, though i think they are a bit to accepting of Ron... i mean the guy was a complete ass the whole 1st year and they just let him back into there group after he is semi nice for a couple of times, then have no suspicions of his erratic behavior
YuukiAsuna-Chan chapter 6 . 2/1/2014
lol, Gabby's plan was a partial success but i highly doubt that she will give up so easily... she seemed very set on giving her virginity to harry and i think she will succeed in her endeavor
YuukiAsuna-Chan chapter 5 . 2/1/2014
well, i must wonder why Harry doesn't seem to be all that good at magic other than his fire abilities, also i hope you are not just going to randomly add power ups, or give random abilities to him or his friends
YuukiAsuna-Chan chapter 4 . 2/1/2014
what is with this Harry? the AN at the start of this said a very dark/evil Harry but he is NOT... also why is he attacking directly? why is he not using magic? why did he run to Quile(forgot name) instead of just teleporting to him?
YuukiAsuna-Chan chapter 3 . 2/1/2014
ok, this isnt what i was expecting... Harry is still a bit annoying, but far better than canon... hope he goes to the dark side soon (even if only for the cookies)
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