|Reviews for The Rise of Overlord Vulcan!|
| YuukiAsuna-Chan chapter 5 . 2/1
well, i must wonder why Harry doesn't seem to be all that good at magic other than his fire abilities, also i hope you are not just going to randomly add power ups, or give random abilities to him or his friends
| YuukiAsuna-Chan chapter 4 . 2/1
what is with this Harry? the AN at the start of this said a very dark/evil Harry but he is NOT... also why is he attacking directly? why is he not using magic? why did he run to Quile(forgot name) instead of just teleporting to him?
| YuukiAsuna-Chan chapter 3 . 2/1
ok, this isnt what i was expecting... Harry is still a bit annoying, but far better than canon... hope he goes to the dark side soon (even if only for the cookies)
| YuukiAsuna-Chan chapter 2 . 2/1
if harry is going to be evil and shit, why did you make him friends with Ron and Granger? he isnt all that different from canon so far...
if he ends up in Griffondor then that would suck ass, as he has displayed no traits for that house while displaying alot from Slytharin
| marcuspgreen chapter 17 . 1/27
I enjoyed this chapter as much as I have the rest of the story. It's fun and manages to overcome the excessively powerful Harry with enough conflict in his personal life to keep things interesting, which is the exact manga formula I believe you're trying to follow. Keep that up and everything here is great.
| hellz swordsman chapter 17 . 1/27
I love ur ebil harry. will there b anymore pokegirls ? and is mel going to b able to do any more of pikachus attacks ? also wen he finally gets to play with emma will she get preggers ? And finally will he b getting ariel as part of his harem ?
| doubledamn chapter 17 . 1/26
Hey, I left this review on the HPArchive as well, re-posting it here due to my own insecurities, as I am unsure whether or not HPA sends alerts when a story is reviewed. (P.S, I have 256ths of Voldies Soul in Harry's head, assuming that each Horcrux halved his soul.)
Very good, I liked the inclusion of the Driders, I remember suggesting them (and later explaining what they were) to someone at somepoint but am unsure whether or not that was you.
I am curious as to this 'black worm' that Melody saw in Vulcan's eye just before the Surge. I am curious as to whether or not it was Voldie's Horcrux attempting to leave, and that the Surge also Purged young Harry from the 256ths of Soul left in his head.
Great chapter, can't wait for Melody to get some time with the Delecleur girls. I have the feeling that young Apprentice would be...imaginative.
| Guest chapter 17 . 1/23
Realy great its always so hard to get good evilHarry storys and yours is the best
| lou2003us chapter 17 . 1/23
I really want to see what happens next!
Looking forward to next chapter!
Keep up the great work.
| Acaila chapter 17 . 1/23
It's been so long since previous chapters were released I don't know if you've always had this problem, but while there weren't really any typos in this chapter the grammar was really bad. I noticed were lots of sentence fragments, misusage of commas and periods, and lots of apostrophes where there shouldn't be any.
Apparently you have three beta readers so I would think grammar errors would be caught, but maybe they happened for precisely this reason. However it happened, it makes this chapter very hard to read.
| O-Mega Lead chapter 17 . 1/22
While unfortunately a lot less polished than your usual work (including a lot of odd/repetitive sentences, largely focused in the beginning half), I am none-the-less pleases at the content and interesting plot. That being said, this story is exploding out everywhere; so much stuff is happening and Harry is losing a lot of control over things. Whether good or bad in the end remains to be seen, though I'm neutral about it at the moment (largely since I absolutely loved it in the first two years where everything was plausibly in cannon). Regardless, still looking forward to how things will develop-and definitely looking forward to seeing more action in the chapters to come.
| legacy of the demented chapter 4 . 1/22
| Percy Jackson7 chapter 17 . 1/21
| Guest chapter 5 . 1/21
Did you forget that the Harry Potter series starts in 1991 Pokemon wasn't around back then.
| Travis S chapter 1 . 1/21
So happy to see another chapter to this amazing story posted. Welcome back Dark Dragon