Hey there! I hope you're doing great!

I just finished reading your story Break Through the Limit, and I absolutely loved it! I'd be thrilled to adapt it into my comic style or even animation. I'd work on it as a commission, and I think you'd really enjoy the final result something you might even want to share!

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I just finished reading this, and there's only one thing I can say: This is a damn good read.

I don't think I can pick out anything bad with this at all, other than I want to know how Raditz is going.

Buu saga? Easily better than canon, no contest. I think you did the other Gods of Destruction better than Dragon Ball Super, and I loved how Janemba (who has my favorite villain design) was one. Pan (who was useless in Canon) is the strongest in all the universes and unlocked 'Super Saiyan 4' kinda. I love how you handled the Dragon Fist and gave explanations to that and Instant transmission. I'm glad that Goku had his own techniques (nova burst, hypernova burst, delayed kamehameha) and that Launch actually played a major role. You handled all of the characters excellently and you leave nothing wanted from the reader. All in all, IT'S OVER 9000!/10. That's my rating.

I said it before, and I'll say it again: This is one hell of a good read.

Called it.

So here's what I'm guessing since Krillin is dead and Gohan's death won't be enough to enraged Goku...
One of two things will probably happen here, Goku dies and Raditz is enraged enough to become the first Super Saiyan or Raditz dies making Goku enraged enough to become a Super Saiyan.

Probably the latter, although I hope for the former so that we see Raditz getting stronger, since we still need Goku to learn instant transmission, unless the author will give it to Raditz instead.

Imagine if the Whis and Alpha Shenron fight was written during DBS. Whis would have exploited time rewinding and ki suppressing mittens to his advantage.

The Soulfire's effects on Kronos Shenron is like the Hakai's effects in Dragon Ball Super. The Hakai is something every God of Destruction have.

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Quite the serial escalation so far, relatively speaking.

Looking forward to how much crazier it can get, number wise and plot-twist wise.

Men your story is nonsense!.first zardon and bulma,comeon!. Secondly gohan the SSG, is like you lost your senses. And thirdly and finally. GOKU DOES NOT HAVE SS3!. IMAGINE! GOKU NO SSE AND INIST A MYSTIC!. YOU ARE JUST MAKING GOKU WEAK! YOU ARE THE WORST WRITER EVER!. fuck your mother

Hi, would you ever consider writing an arc on this latest spin? Would be quite something to think about from a reader's end ... sound's primordial. Hope life is treating you well!

gohan:apes don't have tails.
piccolo in the afterlife: NEEEEEERD!

I do hope Piccolo still comes around even if he's not training Gohan here.

I reread your fic from time to time and I saw your bringer of death fanfic reference. The galaxy is in the hands of a woman, o something. I bet that is oniya or however you spell it from bod. Not sure been a while since i reread that one

I'm really going to enjoy reading through this story again. This is going to be my third readthrough. Piccolo being stronger than Goku makes sense considering he has nothing to do but train while Goku settled down and probably didn't get to train as much.

i am dropping,the fic is nod bad.. in fact its very good,its just no my kind of thing... i maybe will one day read it later... but not now