Those woooooords... I have read many things in my life so I can say that when you were explaining the sound Goku’s Kaioken made, that was truly beautiful.

Wow, what an epic. A long journey, but I'm finally through it all. Can I just say that I prefer your overlong story to Honor Trip? At least you understand Dragon Ball's core audience better than that guy could ever hope.

Every word of this is for a DBZ nut, and while I find myself no longer identifying as such, thank you for allowing me to relive that part of my childhood through a genuinely enjoyable story that treats logic and power-scaling with a modicum of respect that Super completely fails at.

I'd always wondered what would happen if Raditz became an ally instead, and you've provided that exact idea for me. So for what this was, and when it was originally posted, thank you.

It was a wonderful ride.

I NEED... TO GO... EVEN FUTHER BEYOND

I had my reservations about this but I'm disgusted by myself for doubting you at all at this point. So I'll just say it again. Bravo Captain Space! Bravo! :D

YES! THESE IS JUSTICE IN THE WORLD OF DRAGON BALL! FALL BEERUS/BILLS! FALLL!

Sigh... there's no justice in the world of Dragon Ball it seems. If it's your 'job' to murder trillions of innocent people then it's somehow morally, ethically, and narratively ok...

God- uh.. **Insert deity name from whatever religion** damn it!

Nooooo! Not Battle of Gods! xD

Oh god... please don't do Dragon Ball Super. PLEASE!

A fitting end to the warrior prince. THIS is how it should be. Writing that DBS can only dream of (and its [un]respective fans can fantasize about) I cannot stress how amazed I am by the strength of story and character that this story has. Bravo Captain Space. Bravo :D

Oh right, Baby isn't strong enough to overwhelm a strong transformation yet.