Really good job with this chapter. Your writing is excellent.

Having Zarbon play the role of Vegeta (albeit temporarily) was a nice twist, especially inasmuch as it helped them to get rid of Dodoria. And his wish makes sense. I think you're doing a good job of guiding the story without making arbitrary changes.

And the dialogue between Raditz and Goku was great! I'm really interested to see how high Raditz's power goes when he gets a senzu...

This along with Bringer of Death and Dream of yesterday are becoming my favorite fanfics to read.

Wonder if Tien will be the one to throw the spirit bomb on freeza or not, and what will happen to trigger the Super Sayian in Goku if Krillin is already dead. That is if you aren't planning to have Raditz become the first ssj.

O well, guess I'll wait and see:p

Nice story, will be tracking this.

Oh btw, you don't happen to know when Dream of yesterday gets updated do you ?:p

I love this story! Please continue updating!

I have a question! What're you gonna do about Mirai Trunks? You can use the same as the original DBZ, or one that would match your story's time line (if he exists in it), OR you could use a completely different character! If you won't tell me exactly, at least eliminate one of the possibilities!

I hope to see your answer next chapter! Bye!

LOL! I loved the Kai part. Great job and keep it up. Can't wait to see more... and really sorry for the overly violent message about the "gary stu" guy... felt like an idiot after I sent it. I'll mind my temper from now on. (As long as Dumb&$$%$ keep their mouths shut that is.) ;)

Ok... now you really overdid it with the stupid on this chapter. Author's notes are fine but this is too much. The chapter is pretty much a random conversation in script format with a small scene to make it seems as if it's a story.

I am reporting this chapter for being in script format.

And because the super long author note was not funny (it is too stupid) and is completely unecessary.

First off, that bonus chapter was genius and highly entertaining, so thanks for that! This was a nice wrap up to the fight, Goku's use of the power poll and nimbus were cool touches.

Nice conclusion to the Saiyan Saga, and I found your Kai version of your story to be hilarious. The story I told you about last time is called Dragonball Z: The Earthling Chronicles. I think it's a pretty good story and it also has Tien learning the Kaio-ken and being trained by King Kai and it might give you some ideas about ways to make some of the humans more powerful.

Good chapter hope you update soon. Is kakarot going to be trained by king kia later?

great story my friend. keep it up.

Way to give Raditz a bigger role. Also a nice storyline and funny "kai" story. Love it.

Hah break trough the limit kai abridged hahahahah nice chapter, i feel like your story isn't getting the feedback it should. You write well, the plot is intresting and you know how to handle fighting scenes.

Well I can see where this is going and I'm getting ahead of myself,and the plot, but.. I wonder who's gonna be the first Super Saiyan

really enjoyed this chapter & the kai version at the end was gold, keep up the good work :-)

Great chapter! I think you tied up everything nicely and I'm looking forward to seeing how you handle your next installment.

Nice nice nice. I like where this is going