Hey another great chapter. I hope you understand I was just trying to make useful criticism. I am pleased with your explanations and I will accept them in the world you're making.

I like how you are switching things up like making Krillin Die instead of Yamcha, and keeping Piccolo angry, and making more people relevant.

One thing to point out when you mention the fighters like Tien raising from 250 to somewhere in the 2k. The point was Earth Fighters use Ki so they appear weaker. Goku was only 400 something but he could more then Double his powerlevel when doing a Kamehameha to OVER NINE HUNDREEEED! So I think a fair assumption is that the Earth Fighters performing powered up attacks equals a bit over double their unweighted power levels.

I am a big Piccolo fanboi, but I'll accept how you killed him off.

Great chapter things have been getting really interesting. I can't wait to see when we will see the Solar Flare and Spirit Bomb. And if we will see the Multi Form Technique at all.

Wow, 0-0
didn't see that coming
Poor Piccolo...
Agh! I keep thinking hes a good guy.

Anyway good chapter. So I hope Gohan acts as stalemate-breaker

Great, this story has a lot of potential and you are developing it well. I believe nappa is still alive, will you keep him like that? because that would be all the saiyans need to revive their race. As you might know, in DBO (story written by toriyama) the humans now have saiyan genes, but they only go super saiyan and they lost their tails, something only half-saiyans seem to keep and they also seem stronger than 1/4 saiyans but i'm not sure that's how genetics work. Anyway good story keep going.

ps: So is launch going to be raditz' girl? are you going to make an OC for nappa if he remains alive? Is vegeta going to be with bulma?

another fun chapter to read, i agree with the power levels. even with goku and raditz, as they spammed their zenkai ability.
nice to see gohan apearing at the end to help.

AARRGGHH! Cliffie! Looking forward to seeing how Tien,Raditz and Goku handle Vegeta's Galick Gun!

Awesome chapter is great to finally see Tien in the picture, can't wait to read the next chapter! :D

Hm... So yamcha is alive and well during the Saiyan battle so far. Giving what that means, I asume Vegeta and Bulma won't get together this time (which would mean a big risk for you but would make the story far more interesting by spicing things up a little; in fact, if you killed Vegeta for good it would make the story *really* interesting and would show you have guts... but I guess fanboys would eat you raw... so it depends on you).

Also, you'll have to find a female to Raditz if you ever go into the Cell games, and since Bulma is going to be with default boy Yamcha (if Vegeta hopefully is permanetly killed in Namek) then I suggest... I don't know how about Lunch? Tien never did anything with her in canon so she's free; she's about Raditz's age and blonde Lunch can match him while shy Lunch can "tame" him.

In fact, if you pair Raditz with Lunch you'll have my undying loyalty for this fic because it would be (at last) something different around here.

Nice chapter! I really enjoyed it! Thank you for the good read. I must say so far I am enjoying this, it will be interesting to see how strong Tein is, and too see how having Raditz here will change things, and if he will stay the most powerful Z fighter, assuming I can call him that now.

I think things start to suffer here as the story becomes more divergent from the original.

I have to say you may not need to state powerlevels as much as you do, there is a reason Akira Toriyama gave up on the idea.

But one thing Nappa most likely is stronger then 4k. Team Four Star believes Nappa to be 6k, and Salagir believes him to be 7. The reasoning being if you read the Manga and even watch the Anime Goku expresses that Nappa is tougher then he thought and that without Kaioken it would take a long time to defeat him. This reflects that Goku is over 8k in power and if Nappa was only 7k then Goku fighting Calmly and tactically will always succeed against a Tired Nappa fighting out of Anger. This came to a head when Goku only barely stops Nappa's Chou Makou with his Kamehameha.

And the Battle with Raditz and Goku VS Vegeta is interesting, and I love groups piling on Stronger foes. But I believe Goku should be much more tired and take much more damage if he is participating in this fight. As each hit Vegeta deals to Goku should be enourmas.

I personally believe Piccolo was probably a little over 4k in the default canon, so I think he should be tougher if he was 1.8k when Raditz Landed and he fought all out against Raditz.

And it feels less significant with this explanation of Gohan being trained by Goku/Raditz. It seems their training shouldn't be as effective as Piccolo's, who absolutely knew of Gohan's power. Their is less emotional significance with this Gohan upbringing.

I also feel they wouldn't have enough Sensu beans to do the training you decided. After all in Canon we only had 2 read for Goku when he arrived.

But still bravo, this is a good read, and I gleefully await Tien.

Let me start saying that the story is very interesting. I always wondered how it would be if Raditz hadn't died!

The battle is very exciting, all the characters are being well explored and they all have their chance to shine! But some of the power levels are a bit... strange. How could Goku get almost as strong in the canon, since he didn't train with King Kai (and, through that, in a higher gravity)? And Raditz, how could he get almost ten times stronger after one year of training? Did he never train before in his life, lol?

Just some quick calculations: Raditz, as shown in the Bardock Special, as already (at least) a teenager when Goku was born, so let's say he was 15. When he arrives in Earth, Goku is already 24 or 25 years old (I'm not sure), so Raditz is about 40. He was a frontline warrior for many decade, and since saiyans have the zenkai ability, surely he was always getting stronger. And I bet saiyans didn't just sit on their asses when they weren't fighting!
What I'm trying to say is: Raditz got waaaaay too strong in this short period of time.

Anyway, keep up the good work! Your fanfic (and Bringer of Death) are making me itch to write my own!

I started reading this just a little while ago from chapter 1 and I'm hooked, I havent been able to stop reading this, its just amazing! Please Update Soon. XD

How is Raditz's power twice Goku's when they've been training together for a year?

Excellent chapter once again! I literally LOL'ed at the dramatic irony when Yamcha dodged the Saibaman. The humor was well-placed and even though there are lots of fights going on, it doesnt seem too cramped. So about the power levels, I'm wondering why Goku is still at half of Raditz's strength... He's been training as vigorously as Raditz... Has he not been taking advantages of the Zenkais?

Yaaaaay this story keeps getting better, and i see you are compromised to it. I keep thinking nappa was t 6000 hmmm. Oh and is that gohan's real powerlevel when calm or is he just supressing it? i know he wasn't trained the way he was with piccolo but you would think raditz would kick his ass to compensate for chi-chis bitchiness. Anyway good story

Cool chapter awesome fight scenes with the brothers against Vegeta, suprised about Gohan making an apperance but all is well