Reviews for One Piece: An Untold Story
Guest chapter 1 . 1/29/2016
its ok but luffy and flare are to close i think, you should have made their personalitys and the way they do stuff a bit more different from each other.
Raibu-Shinu chapter 8 . 9/10/2013
Where's the rest of it?! it can't be done! I neeed to read moooooore! T_T please start writting it again it was amazing! Sooo fuuuunny!
Blackgaz22 chapter 8 . 7/27/2013
please update soon. rally good so far. :)
SkullByte chapter 8 . 12/30/2012
UWAI! yay I love this! when you have time please read over my stories!
Girl-luvs-manga chapter 7 . 11/29/2012
Nice! Luffy having a twin haven't seen that often!
kage kitsune 14 chapter 7 . 11/27/2012
Great story. Update soon!
TwilightMelodic chapter 6 . 11/2/2012
Please update soon
SweetestSarcasm chapter 6 . 10/30/2012
Yay! I like her. Update soon.
SweetestSarcasm chapter 5 . 10/28/2012
Hmm, I like this. Please update soon.
ArcadianKnight chapter 5 . 10/20/2012
Awesome! I think that secretly, the chief is a badass and Buggy is going to get his ass handed to him. XD Update Soon :)
Animelover1754 chapter 2 . 9/21/2012
Liking your story so far. Looking forward to your future chapters. _
18.NekoMimi.27 chapter 2 . 9/13/2012
Very interesting, please update soon :)
ArcadianKnight chapter 2 . 9/10/2012
Are there going to be any other pairings?... Like Luffy and Nami (crosses fingers and hopes) I really love it so far :) Keep up the good work :D
Whispers-of-Eternal-Moon-Mist chapter 1 . 8/30/2012
I liked it. You plan on finishing, yes?
TC chapter 1 . 8/12/2012
loved it want to see more and i think people would like to know if you are doing 1 episode per ch.
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