|Reviews for Shadow of Israphel: Fanfiction Version|
| BlueYusei chapter 1 . 9/8/2012
Nicely done! You got every single line in this since I've watched them!
| AstuteSage9 chapter 1 . 8/19/2012
Love it really kept the personality right keep it up... I WANT MORE!
| yamina-chan chapter 3 . 8/15/2012
Nice to see you've added an other chapter D
But I think the dialouge is getting a bit to much, describtions of the area and other things in an interesting way would be needed.
I have seen the videos (of course) but reading this I got no sense of the area or what really was happening at all. It'd be sad if you just write their dialouge down with a little information here and there, that wouldn't be all that much fun to read. It worked better in the first two chapters.
| yamina-chan chapter 2 . 8/9/2012
This was actually quite amusing to read XD
Some heros they are *laugh*
I like the feal you've given to this and it actually inspired me to something XD
The "true name" bit isn't quite right but that's fine. Well done I'd say.
| BlackPanther101 chapter 1 . 8/8/2012