Reviews for Shadow of Israphel: Fanfiction Version
BlueYusei chapter 1 . 9/8/2012
Nicely done! You got every single line in this since I've watched them!
AstuteSage9 chapter 1 . 8/19/2012
Love it really kept the personality right keep it up... I WANT MORE!
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yamina-chan chapter 3 . 8/15/2012
Nice to see you've added an other chapter D
But I think the dialouge is getting a bit to much, describtions of the area and other things in an interesting way would be needed.
I have seen the videos (of course) but reading this I got no sense of the area or what really was happening at all. It'd be sad if you just write their dialouge down with a little information here and there, that wouldn't be all that much fun to read. It worked better in the first two chapters.
yamina-chan chapter 2 . 8/9/2012
This was actually quite amusing to read XD
Some heros they are *laugh*
I like the feal you've given to this and it actually inspired me to something XD
The "true name" bit isn't quite right but that's fine. Well done I'd say.
BlackPanther101 chapter 1 . 8/8/2012
Update? :)