Reviews for Focus
Guest chapter 1 . 11/10/2014
Is pretty good
It would have been nice if this was filled out a little more, but the emptiness in the first three parts is sorta poetic
You're good at words
washington-rain chapter 1 . 11/9/2012
I liked it, good detailing and writing style
Suishou Haruka chapter 1 . 8/26/2012
redleaveshavefallen chapter 1 . 8/10/2012
;u; This is really good. I can clearly see the difference of quality between the first three sections and the fourth, but it doesn't detract from the piece, it only makes the ending stronger. Very nice writing.
rainshadow effect chapter 1 . 8/10/2012
This was pretty interesting! You have a cool style, short paragraphs which make reading really easy. The agitation and apparent frustration Yuuki brings onto Kaname only makes this pairing even..cuter here. Though I must say, Yuuki was really quite mean at number 4, haha!
Yukaianne chapter 1 . 8/8/2012
I probably would have reviewed two days ago when you uploaded, but I haven't been logging in for the past few days because I've been trying to do some writing... Anyhow.

I love this! So cute!

I think Kaname needs to loosen up ;) He's too... Kaname. You captured him well!
Ms.Cerisier chapter 1 . 8/8/2012
Kaname's borns to be tsundere and he is so cute just the way he is, anyway thanks for sharing they were great