Reviews for UP DATED: Pheromones
lucille692003 chapter 4 . 12/27/2016
Please update
Neko-fire demon tempest chapter 4 . 10/16/2016
Raw beef & chocolate . . . that actually kind of makes me hungry.
Neko-fire demon tempest chapter 1 . 10/2/2016
Someone's in the dog house!
Amaya01 chapter 1 . 8/2/2016
Hello, it's just I don't understand what happened to danny? :/
Guest chapter 4 . 5/21/2016
Ok this is not English, need a beta
willowmaruis chapter 4 . 6/7/2015
I love it giggle
um chapter 1 . 2/11/2014
this story was horrible
Guest chapter 1 . 2/11/2014
"Scott we need to get him to the hospital he's bleed too much, the bite it torn." Allison said

that made no sense whatsoever and you've done this countless times, get a beta or edit this properly because I can't read fanfics like that let alone anyone can
DirtyChiChi chapter 1 . 9/29/2013
I really did want to read this but the amount of spelling and grammar mistakes is so high that I can't get into it. Another thing that you may want to work on is using a better choice of words, it will help paint a better picture and won't sound so juvenile.
darrylover16 chapter 4 . 8/7/2013
Is there going to be more with the pups? i Liked this a lot there is not enough good Mpreg out there.
Comical chapter 4 . 7/24/2013
update this is awesome
Marie chapter 1 . 6/16/2013
It was good, but it was kinda hard to read. You really need to check grammar because there are paragraphs/sentences that really need commas, periods, and there's a few mispellings.
sweettea6519 chapter 4 . 5/23/2013
Please do a sequel I would like to know the sex of all the kids.
Lady Gaidin chapter 1 . 4/1/2013
Cute but you need to work on your grammar.
Her Pillow James chapter 4 . 12/30/2012
I really like the story plot, I just can't get over the grammar mistakes :/
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