|Reviews for Broken Bough|
| Liz chapter 30 . 1/31
I am so loving this story. Cant wait for more chapters. Keep up the good work.
| steamboat chapter 30 . 1/15
Nice couple of chapters!
I like how you included Harm's C 130 carrier landing, though he couldn't have caught the 2 wire since a C 130 doesn't have a tail hook.
| achaon chapter 30 . 1/15
Good chapter. Thanks.
| ArmyDT42 chapter 30 . 1/15
Nice twist on the C-130 landing. Glad to see things are peacable between Jack and Sergei. The Rabb extended family keeps on growing. Very good update.
| byrhthelm chapter 30 . 1/13
Nice working in to the story of the C-130 carrier landing there!
And another nice touch having Cassie born on the 4th!
| TnJAGAz chapter 29 . 12/2/2013
An interesting turn of events - so Sergei is the father of Loren's baby...at least he
wants to do the honorable thing. :)
| 1 Ninja Girl chapter 1 . 12/2/2013
Dammit! Can I push Singer overboard? Oh please let me!
| ArmyDT42 chapter 29 . 11/23/2013
That was very nicely done. Quite open minded from most sides. I got a little 80s sitcom vibe from this, but I enjoyed it immensely. Looking forward to the next chapter.
| byrhthelm chapter 29 . 11/21/2013
Cute chapter, and I'm relieved that everyone took the news so well. I half expected Jack to have a hissy fit!
| ArmyDT42 chapter 28 . 11/5/2013
Well I certainly thought this was starting to flow too smoothly. With Sergei back, I am interested in seeing what is going to happen with Loren and the wedding. Harm looks to be caught in the middle. Great update.
| steamboat chapter 28 . 11/3/2013
Holy guacamole! It just struck me. Keeter...getting married? The apocalypse is upon us! Hahaha! Marvelous chapter! I am so enjoying your story! Looking forward to more soon!
| byrhthelm chapter 28 . 11/3/2013
Nice for Jack and Loren.
It always amazed me that Sturgis blamed Bud for losing his case. Sure Bud messed up, but if Sturgis hadn't screwed the pooch to stat with, then Bud wouldn't have been put in that position!
Nicely balanced chapter with the fluff of the engagement countered by the angst of the case. Thank you.
| ArmyDT42 chapter 27 . 9/23/2013
Great way to end the chapter! Heck of a difference between the start and the end! Keep up the good work.
| Guest chapter 2 . 9/19/2013
Interesting friendship brewing between Mac and Loren.
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/19/2013
How did this first chapter become all about Harm's faults? Mac really screwed up their relationship too.