|Reviews for The Spirit of Competition|
| Bibi chapter 1 . 4/30
Hahaaa, that was perfectly written. I love scenarios that take care not to dump plausibility and characterization down the drain. Funny, too! "Dammit, I should have sucked him off instead!" Pure poetry, that.
It's got a shine of polyamory to it, too, which I adore. What a perfect fic.
| the-little-guru chapter 1 . 12/21/2014
This is the funniest thing I've ever read about Mako!
| Midnight4568 chapter 1 . 11/16/2014
| riis19 chapter 1 . 10/31/2013
I can honestly say I was not prepared for the threesome :/ but my word the ending of it was hilarious. I ended up dying from laughter at it. But you seem to have a thing for making Tahno bi? Idk... but still I was a bit weirded out by the fact that Mako responded since I know how much he hates Tahno but still they were IC and it was hilarious. I can read almost anything once I find it hilarious no matter how much I might be weirded out by it. But good work on this one! lololol
| Algor Nox chapter 1 . 1/3/2013
AWWWW! Is all I can say. Clever Tahno, though not clever enough to actually succeed.
| Teahazz chapter 1 . 10/27/2012
I grinned like an idiot through this entire story, "a sexy emergency" lmao only Tahno. Great job!
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/12/2012
dude i laughed so hard at the end xP well done!
| Drakona Fuyu chapter 1 . 8/29/2012
ahhh! -speechless- ah... ah... ah... ah... 3
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/20/2012
Beutiful prehaps a squel?
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/14/2012
Oh this was amazing. :D the sex was delicious and the ending was hilarious! I actually LOL'd. This fic should have way more comments. Fantastic job :)
| RavynSkye chapter 1 . 8/7/2012
This is so strangely IC for Tahno, and pure epicness.
I must admit though, I spent the entire fic waiting for the other shoe to fall, and be let in on the joke, because I know how you are with lemons and the thought of you writing a SERIOUS lemon that didn't end in hilarity was too foreign a concept to even consider. XD;
I'm just glad that you always know how to do the hilarious!lemon with such wonderfully crack-y results.
There will always be a special place in my cold, dark fangirlish heart for you and your lemons which always lead to more cackling than coming.
Hearts and Hugs,
| Knuczema chapter 1 . 8/7/2012
I gotta say the idea of Mako letting Tahno screw him just to keep him away from Korra is hot. I think I have a new slash ship for this fandom.
Very well written.