Reviews for The Cold And Heartless
Guest chapter 15 . 4/6
Look man no one justs grabs ours shirts and pulls us behind them word by word and not expect people to have a piece of them ripped out and imbedded in this story when you just cut the lifeline without giving us something because face it we're selfish. I don't know who you are or what happened or what is happening but you need to finish what you started because you have a gift
Noob chapter 15 . 3/23
Yeahhhh just started this series and realized your last update was TWO YEARS AGO I NEED MORE WHERE ARE YOU
Kata chapter 6 . 5/18/2014
I'm not a Talia/Bane shipper, but I absolutely LOVE your story and definitely ship younger Talia and Bane. I'm so excited to finally read a story about Talia and her training. Your writing is wonderful and I'm hooked!
Vacheriechica chapter 15 . 2/3/2014
OMG! I could not stop reading this! Its fucking beautiful! You need to update soon because iam dying right now...I need more!
seline28 chapter 1 . 10/26/2013
please update soon! the suspense is killing me!
Alicia chapter 15 . 10/20/2013
finish what you started
Guest chapter 15 . 10/16/2013
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PeersHitInMoscow chapter 15 . 10/14/2013
I love this story so much it is my favorite Bane x Talia story they're so in character and it's great! I'll just patiently wait for that next chapter lol. And the beginning of this chapter I was totally confused because of Talia's hot dream messing with my order of events xD. Awww I hope it's not too long before she gets back to Bane.
Charlotte chapter 15 . 10/2/2013
I do not know if you will receive this message but if it s the case my boyfriend and me we appreciate your story and we hope that you finish what you have started I'm at university so I know it's hard to Work and at the same time doing what we love .Your story is very interesting but we do not understand why Bane is so cold with Talia Sorry for our English we live in Quebec so we talk in french
Charlotte chapter 15 . 10/2/2013
I do not know if you will receive this message but if it s the case, I sincerely hope that you will continue your story you were a good start but there should be a conclusive endmy boyfriend does not understand why Bane is so hard with Talia and sorry for our English we live in Quebec
Guest chapter 15 . 10/1/2013
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Caligirl87 chapter 15 . 9/6/2013
Wow this chapter totally threw me through a loop. I was definitley not expecting for that to happen & for bane to send her away. Another great chapter & I'm so happy that you are back, your story is one of the best ones on here. I'm looking forward to your next update, especially after what happened in this chappy. : ).
Lola chapter 15 . 9/6/2013
So they didn't actually hook up and it was a dream? What a bummer. This chapter was a bit confusing for me as to what was going on between Bane and Talia although I would like to see more of them. Less flashbacks and more Bane and Talia. It was about time you updated. Update soon!
finaljoy chapter 15 . 9/6/2013
SIERRA. YOU ARE MESSING WITH MY BRAIN MORE THAN INCEPTION DID OH MY GOSH. With this little stunt, I'll be second guessing everything! But it's always good to keep readers on their toes :)

And oh my gosh, you're back! You may not have liked the chapter, but I really enjoyed it (enough to forgive the long wait (; )! Even if it was delicately tearing my heart from my chest the entire time, it was still good to read. I have to wonder why Bane's trusting Blanchet, though. I have to wonder why ANYONE would trust Blanchet, but I suppose otherwise there won't be a lovely case of dramatic irony for you to build up even more to :'D

I liked Bane's thoughts in love, and how exceptionally revealing it all is about his character. He seems to be going through a cycle of selfishness, and any time he has an extended period of time away from Talia (or maybe just anyone whom he actually cares about?), the more selfish and survival oriented he is. He knows that love is a dangerous thing to feel, but rather than close himself off from it or use it to his advantage, he seems desperately terrified of it, enough to value his life over the bonds and accomplishments he could make. That's a particularly interesting idea, especially with how he is little more than a zealous and militant revolutionary. Can't wait to see how you develop him further ;)

And Talia! Wonderful descriptions of her, and how she is far more broken now than she ever could have been when she thought Bane was dead. I especially liked the big reveal of the chapter, and how you made her thought process shuddery and disjointed, very effecftive. I wonder if she will bounce back from this one. At some point she's going to develop a callus that turns her pain into fuel, and I can't wait to read that.

Gorgeous word choice in this chapter as a whole, but I especially liked the line about how love couldn't be described by savage words. That was so perfectly fitting, especially from Bane. He seems to be really in tune with that sort of thing, to the point of being a part time aesthete XD

Loved the chapter, and I can't wait to see what you do next.
DudeISoDumb chapter 14 . 7/1/2013
When I got out of the movie theater after seeing TDKR I remember two things that I wished happened—one: that Batman had died at the end; would have made his sacrifice more meaningful instead of that cop-out ending, and two: that they explained and went into more depth of Talia and Bane’s relationship—and that is why I really love this fanfic—because you explained exactly that. I absolutely fell in love with your story, it is just wonderfully incredible, and it easily ranks my top five lists of personal favorites. I love your writing style; it is beautiful, just completely beautiful. I love how you convey the character’s emotional states; you make them seem so real. I love how they all appear in-character, that is always refreshing—to see each character consistent throughout, and if they do change, there is a good reason for it. I especially love how you portrayed Bane and Talia’s relationship—I just love your ideas and scenarios—I really believe that something like what you’ve described throughout your story would actually happen to these characters—your realism is amazing! I just can’t praise this story enough, it’s so incredible, it’s amazing, it’s beautiful, it’s heart wrenching, it’s so REAL! And you are all the more brilliant for creating this seemingly unfeasible masterpiece. You are a master wordsmith and I thoroughly enjoyed and love your story—which makes me a little irksome to see so few reviews! Your story deserves one-thousand! It’s just that good! :D I love how you change from one character’s point of view to another; it really explains the character’s emotions and psyche really well. Anyways, I hope to hear from you soon, thank you again for this awesome story and best o luck! :D
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