|Reviews for Forbidden Touch|
| jojoDO chapter 1 . 2/6
WOWEEE MIKE! And to think this was one of your earliest pieces... I really need to binge read your older stuff O_O
You held nothing back with your arsenal of adjectives and beautiful descriptions of the two sisters' wet caves and their delicious moans. The atmosphere was so warm and sensual, yet so naughty but in a cute, adorable way.
The cutest part was Cassandra wanting to please Sophitia, but Sophitia wanted to make sure she wasn't left out either. It was such a beautiful blend of cute and sexy that I just... GAAAAAH X_X
Nicely done, my friend. Nicely done.
| darknife14 chapter 1 . 9/6/2016
Sir, it was a great read sir
| The Man They Call The Truth chapter 1 . 7/29/2016
For the love of all things holy... I think I'm gonna lose control of myself if I keep reading stuff this good. Mike you're amazing keep it up
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/30/2016
Amazing work here well off to read more(fall over the side of ship)
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/16/2016
That was very well written and very hot. Excellent job, Major.
| Felix Balder 96 chapter 1 . 4/25/2015
I've been looking for a Sophie x Cassie fan fiction for a long time. THANKS. It sounds weird, bit could you do a Pyrrha x Cassandra or Sophitia fanfic. Of course, the Pyrrha from SC5. Just a request. Thanks!
| YuriChan220 chapter 1 . 1/15/2015
Oh, goodness! Another one!? Well, it's obvious since it IS rated M. Still, it was a great read, along with all of your other lemon yuri stories. ;)
| Titanthetys chapter 1 . 4/27/2014
You know, if you read the first part of the story, you'll see how much you've improved Major!
And I bet you've improved a lot since you wrote this, that's awesome owo
This was really good (/*O*)/
Thank you for such a good lemon, I see that it was worth the hard work, keep it up! (/*O*)/
I'll read the other stories later 8D
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/4/2014
| Py687 chapter 1 . 11/10/2013
Very well written! A variable vocabulary matched with moderate pacing and we've ourselves a winner. You could probably include a little more dialogue, but that could go either way as it's always fun to read yuri _without_ the shoujo-ai. It's been a while since I read lemons, and a long one is always a treat.
Thanks for writing.
| Wicked Sick chapter 1 . 6/17/2013
DAMN! ...That's all I can think of saying in a good way. Just plain, damn hot.
| bogey654 chapter 1 . 4/28/2013
Nothing short of hot. Guess Cassy isn't so confident when recieving! And a B-E-A-U-T-I-F-U-L ending!
| Darkdragon98 chapter 1 . 1/28/2013
That was super great you should make another sophitiaXcassandra
| ScarletVirus33 chapter 1 . 12/15/2012
Damn Major only you can make familial love oh so sinfully delicious! I would profess shock at the fact that the particulars were sisters who seem to take a liking to milking each others' flowers (yum!) but one thing I learn from you after reading all your works of art is to "expected the unexpected." I just wish more and more authors would take a cue from you 'cause you seem to bring out the sensual of characters especially when in the throes of passion. I mean the only way this could be any more sexual is if one of the servants of Hephaestus was packing a tallywhacker. Don't laugh, Major! If you had a chance to peruse certain movies like "Porky's" then you'll that this term is now exactly a foreign concept. Anyhoo I appreciate the fact that both Cassandra and Sophitia was able to give and receive on a equal basis. It's no fun if one sibling were to just dominate the other and besides I've read one to many yuri fics where one woman completely dominates the other (re: "The Awesome Rematch"). I can only imagine the reaction from the gods of Mt. Olympus after witnessing their most faithful servants going down on each other and gifting each other the pleasure of a mind blowing orgasims (the goddess Aphrodite must be green with envy and secretly planning to kidnap the sisters for her own private orgy). Just so you know Major I plan on taking your advice on reading you others pieces of art 'cause if this is any indication I'll have to wear a jimmy hat just to avoid jizzing on my laptop (umm, too much information? Nah!). Until next time Major, SV33 out!
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/9/2012
GR8 SC Yuri Fic! U sure can write sum good, detailed, & intense "Action" Scenes... (ya catch my drift?) My PenName is- Hope4Zafina -but my Wi-Fi got screwd recently & it wont let me sign in now... MLEHH...