|Reviews for Gohan: The Fallen Hero|
| Dumanios chapter 21 . 2/18
Just read the whole story. I must say, it's a fun read and an interesting role reversal between Cell and Gohan.
My prediction? A small piece of Cell managed to escape Gohan's blast. Cell comes back in his Super Perfect Form and defeat Vegeta and Gohan. Meanwhile, Tien probably dies, but Piccolo is kept around because of the Dragon Balls. Then we have the downer ending of Gohan and Vegeta winning.
| gammabeta99 chapter 21 . 12/21/2013
awesome story! when will you up date?
| Guest chapter 21 . 12/15/2013
wow i love
| Thestrality chapter 21 . 12/13/2013
I don't really have much criticism. I guess it was phrased a bit inefficiently, some parts could definitely be worded differently.
Good story. Very interesting and action-y. I do hope now that the battle with cell is over, you can use more unique plot. From that, I mean instead of just "Urghhh, power!" You could add more uncanon-like prospects and happenings in, such as the fact of Gohan's saiyan side increasing and such. I also suppose Seventeen and Eighteen died? Pity. I liked them.
| Guest chapter 3 . 11/29/2013
Nice but work on your grammer you made some errors but regardless your story is incredible
| kami carp chapter 21 . 10/19/2013
I loved not keep me in suspense
continues the story
who was the one who helped gohan?
| Supersaiyaninfinitygohan chapter 21 . 10/1/2013
A pretty good fight and I liked the characterization, but I'd work on the amount of "and"'s and "which"'s.
Sorry for the late review by the way. My e-mail for updates has been screwy.
| Apope chapter 21 . 9/27/2013
Yey! Both of them dead ! Training in Othrworld XD! Now is Gohan/Vegeta is going to become Good/Bad or...Oh, and, yeah, since Cell uses something like SSj, he shouldn't be able to attain for longer Periods of Time or Higher Levels, so, yeah, Good Point there, but Regeneration's an ass, so, yeah...
| Apope chapter 20 . 9/27/2013
At the start of the Chapter(Beam Struggle), why didn't Goku just use IT and let Vegeta's Attack go off harmlessly into Space? What an Idiot...And if he'd used the IT Spam Trick From Scratch he'd've survived anyway -_-...
| Perfect Carnage chapter 21 . 9/27/2013
It appears as though by calculations were correct. I am sorry for taking so long, but there were complications. I don't even know why they don't just accept death and stop pretending there are lesser evils.
| ShadowLDrago chapter 21 . 9/26/2013
Whoah, Cell, you are undeniably powerful, but when you are winning you become arrogant, when losing, desperate, just like Frieza, while you may be able to regenerate the muscle strain of the Kaioken, you can't do it instantaneously like say, Buu.
| Guest chapter 21 . 9/23/2013
Great chapter! I wonder what will happen now with Cell out of the way?
| tabitha.scott.923 chapter 21 . 9/24/2013
This story makes me cry litteriliy! I had to cheer for cell and that toor me in too because gonna is my second fav character.
| DarkVoid116 chapter 21 . 9/24/2013
Cell being dead intrigues me- who, if anyone, will stop Gohan and Vegeta now?
This is a solid story but I think it could be a little better. I think some of the characters are underdeveloped and the plot is occasionally thin but all in all it's good.
I was hoping that Goku would handle things after ascending but now I've got no idea lol..
| DarkVoid116 chapter 20 . 9/24/2013
Goku dying might ignite Cell's power? Or something like that? Wow.
Vegeta and Gohan need to get what they deserve and soon IMO. I really do not like Vegeta and Gohan lately, although I liked Gohan for the majority of the story.
Bulma and Trunks being meaningless to Vegeta is too tough for me to believe...