Reviews for Light Up the Darkness: Part 1
Daniel Dunn chapter 1 . 4/11/2013
Well, I made allot of mistakes in this so i am going to add this story (updated) to another one with the same name and remove this, i have more and will post it (and have this one deleted) along with the corrections
Guest chapter 1 . 10/14/2012
hey bud loved the setup but the dialogue suffered for instance he just heard her say her namd and get attacked on camer and he asks her what her name is and what's wrong and I'd say lay off the love and heroics otherwise terrific vivid imagery
Jinx Kalantha chapter 1 . 8/16/2012
This is intense.