|Reviews for No Thinking Thing|
| fandomshit chapter 1 . 4/14/2014
I wanted to say that apart from some spellings, it was great. (you wrote know where you had to write no)
Harry seemed a bit OOC, but its fanfic so yeah
with respect to the real harry, the virgin version applies. But with respect to yours, definately the non-virgin one.
Just one woman's opinion.
Have a good day.
| starlite22 chapter 4 . 11/12/2012
Prefer chapter 3
| Raichu Pikachu chapter 2 . 8/13/2012
"What he did instead was sit side ways so that his legs cradled her. He pulled her back against his chest, and rested his chin on her right shoulder, facing the school." - If Harry is sitting on the fountain sideways Hermione's shoulder should be touching his chest.
"He dropped a glistening finger onto her lips, rubbing her juices against them." - This wasn't sexy it was disgusting.
| badkidoh chapter 4 . 8/10/2012
Another great chapter. although I liked the Chapter-3 version better.
| michaeldavidgeng chapter 4 . 8/10/2012
| michaeldavidgeng chapter 3 . 8/9/2012
| pawsrule chapter 3 . 8/8/2012
Fantastic! Great story.
| badkidoh chapter 3 . 8/8/2012
| badkidoh chapter 2 . 8/8/2012
well i like it so far.
| cw1991 chapter 2 . 8/8/2012
Very well written.
| pawsrule chapter 2 . 8/7/2012
Wonderful! Really hot. I love a determined Harry. Do have your stories posted on another site? Please continue.
| michaeldavidgeng chapter 2 . 8/7/2012
| pawsrule chapter 1 . 8/7/2012
Very good. Look forward to next update.
| michaeldavidgeng chapter 1 . 8/7/2012