|Reviews for Skyline|
| whohellanoes chapter 1 . 1/15/2013
Great story. Thanks for sharing.
| Songirl chapter 1 . 8/20/2012
Gorgeous little snack of a story...going to check for more.
| sleeptalker1 chapter 1 . 8/17/2012
Skyline may be a birthday present for your friend but it's a gift for us all.
Normal drabbles bug me - I'm not a patient person & so the time I have to read I prefer to spend reading a decent length chapter or o/s & not clicking 'next' every minute or so. So this was a pleasant surprise in having it drabble style but all on one page.
A o/s which let us read between the lines with so few words given - not an easy feat but done so well.
I only have one hope -read request lol- & that is you'll do Edward's pov on this. I'm sure it would be truly fascinating to see his side of things - him watching her from the outside, so near yet so far. Always wondering if she'd ever 'see' him & his relief/realisation when she does.
| Cathy9 chapter 1 . 8/17/2012
I loved Skyline, Bella's paranoia was fun and how she could not notice Edward is beyond me but you made it believable. Great read!
| Madeline4994 chapter 1 . 8/17/2012
this was great! loved the pacing.
| DeeDreamer chapter 1 . 8/14/2012
This was just... really NICE. *sigh* Thank you for sharing! xo DD
| abinar chapter 1 . 8/9/2012
This is just lovely. Thanks for sharing it with us.
| AnnaLund chapter 1 . 8/8/2012
Brilliant writing. And awesome that you kept the drabble-format, but without doing 711 chapters; you kept the words flowing, uninterrupted. Well done. I am sure your friend is falling to pieces over this one ;-)
thanks for sharing your talent.
| Julia-S77 chapter 1 . 8/8/2012
Great one shot, loved it x
| jackqueenking chapter 1 . 8/8/2012
Short and oh-so-sweet. Thank you.
| EmersonReadClosedAcct chapter 1 . 8/8/2012
Certain relationships can take so much out of you that you can barely see to the end of your nose. It can be such a slow decline that you never realize how you could have gotten to that place. Two years is a long time. I would imagine her desire to stick it out for that duration shows how seriously she takes her relationships.
its not written but I can almost feel Edward's surprise and palpable sigh of relief when she does finally notice him. That's good writing. Thanks for sharing.
| cilie chapter 1 . 8/8/2012
Absolutely love this! So few words, but so much to read between the lines. Wonderfully written, thank you!
| potcookies chapter 1 . 8/7/2012
this was adorable omfgggggggggggggggggg :3
| Fiyaaa chapter 1 . 8/7/2012
sophiejax / jaxon22 tweeted about this :)
Beautifully written and swoonworthy! Absolutely loved it!
Happy Birthday Vicanlp x
"like a pancakeless plate" - possibly the best simile ever.
| vickigoesroar chapter 1 . 8/7/2012
I loved it! vicanlp forwarded this to me and this is just the sweetest birthday present for her! So cute and fluffy and a tiny bit mysterious, my favourite!