Reviews for The One and Only
LightMidnight chapter 1 . 4/17
This story has so much potential, but it really needs to be edited. Lots of typos and misspelling, but the overall thought is clever. I'd say it would be so much more solid if it was fixed. Good luck
Waiiiittt chapter 23 . 3/15
Ummmm chapter 22 . 3/15
Here is da torture?
Awsome chapter 15 . 3/15
...This is legit!, I know I am late fo the party on this fanfic, but I luv it;)
Samantha Vi Tenebris chapter 1 . 1/4
Hello, WingBladeWeaver1357-san. Just started read your Transformers fanfic/story and I like/love it a lot. It's very cute, hilarious and great.
Slagger chapter 21 . 12/16/2016
I hate how you keep using Miss and mr. For the most of her dialogue involving character interaction.
Learn how to use proper point of view also it's cheap the way you write this
MysticFire101 chapter 55 . 10/20/2016
Whoa, how many more horrible surprises is Jen going to get in her life. First she finds her sister hates her and is trying to kill her and then she finds out that Sides and Sunny have someone else.(Sighs and shakes head) Poor, poor Jen. But tell me, did they really have an evil intention?Update soon!:D
Archer of the Eclipse chapter 12 . 7/15/2016
"I own you" lol not to be mean at the typo! I miss spell stuff a lot... and I know when I do .
Jo chapter 3 . 7/5/2016
reptoholic chapter 36 . 6/22/2016
LOVED it... I wonder if it will be all four?
reptoholic chapter 35 . 6/22/2016
... attemptive murder, hit and run... way more than a week of community service: even for juveniles.
reptoholic chapter 34 . 6/22/2016
reptoholic chapter 33 . 6/22/2016
CUTE!... I would love to see them get more involved, even if she is dense, they can make more mves.
reptoholic chapter 32 . 6/22/2016
reptoholic chapter 31 . 6/22/2016
Awesome story.
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