|Reviews for The After Story|
| RPR chapter 3 . 9/12/2012
Alternate ending please...it kinda hurts to see only one of them survived...and it really made me want to cry...
| emanon chapter 3 . 9/12/2012
I feel bad for them... but at least they are life in content before right?...Right?
After seeing how close they are now i fell even more sad after Len dead. It never happen to me (thankfully) but losing somebody that dear to you would never be easy. It s really sad...
| rilenchan3700 chapter 1 . 8/8/2012
WOW! GOOD STORY! Waiting for the next chap. ;))
| CatPhones chapter 1 . 8/8/2012
Oh my god! Thank you for making this story XD School is starting to get really hectic and reading this really helped me relax quite some. At least now I have a story to look forward to and check on *sigh*
Anyways, good fanfics don't come easy nowadays so I personally think this ficlet really do make things better owo I don't know why, but grammar is starting to become an issue here.
Well, there were minor typos (don't worry, they're really really small), but overall, this is nicely written. And the seriousness is really refreshing to read. I mean, this fandom mostly comprises of sweet fluffy romance stories :p
And really...too much of something is never good.
Anyways, I'm looking forward to your next update