Reviews for Gradual Love
Ethylix chapter 7 . 1/29
Oh my gosh. This. Story. Was. So. Great...I read all of it in one sitting and was left wanting more lol. When I found out Chichi had a miscarriage, it was so emotional and heartbreaking. Especially Goku's reaction, poor him :( I think it is completely fine with you updating when you feel it's ready, an amazing plot and writing like this does take time. Also, I agree that a good story or fanfiction doesn't have to include lemon or graphic sex, personally that doesn't move me as much as true and heart-to-heart scenes. I love how you brought out Goku's thoughts and feelings so well, there wasn't a time where I thought he didn't sound like how he actually is. I really hope you're going to update though and haven't given up on this story yet, it is honestly so well written :)
spiritofsilence chapter 7 . 11/15/2016
I love your story I think Im in love with it! please you have to update soon!
CrockedRanger02 chapter 7 . 7/27/2016
I thought it would be longer, but anyways, this chapter made my heart skip few beats from your chapter! Good job man! ;)
JC chapter 2 . 2/19/2016
Baby steps. that's the way to go. Nice work so far.
Yuyui Hime chapter 7 . 9/13/2015
These chapter is too beautiful to be true! I can't wait for the next chapter!
Yuyui Hime chapter 6 . 9/13/2015
*burst into sobbing* I'm so happy for you Goku! Nobody can take ChiChi away from you!
Yuyui Hime chapter 5 . 9/13/2015
Dont you dare take ChiChi away!
Yuyui Hime chapter 4 . 9/13/2015
Yuyui Hime chapter 3 . 9/13/2015
I love the way you write on Goku who is a husband that's filled with curiousity and doubts, it's only ChiChi who got the patience to love him regardless of anything :')
Yuyui Hime chapter 2 . 9/13/2015
The wedding is SO BEAUTIFUL! I cried okay! I cried! *wipe tears*
Yuyui Hime chapter 1 . 9/13/2015
To be honest, this is the first time I read a Goku/ChiChi fanfic and I must say i'm glad I found yours. I've been reading DragonBall since I was 10 and now I'm almost at the age of a working person.

As I read your story, I realized that people didn't really give these two pair the recognition that they deserve as I feel they're one of the most innocent and patience couple I've ever encounter in the anime/manga world.

Thank you for taking your time in writing this beautiful story :-)
calliezop chapter 7 . 3/4/2015
danny dapper chapter 7 . 8/17/2014
HFHKQDJFOWOFJ THAT WAS SO BEAUTIFULLY WELL DONE IM CRYING ;O; your characterization was stupendous omg there are so many badly done gochichi fics but this one was amazing I don't know if you'll ever read this since this fix is apparently from 2003 but I had to say something
Hunnybee chapter 7 . 6/1/2014
I know that you haven't worked on this story in very long time, nor do I expect you too because of one random review nine years later.

But I just had to let you know how wonderfully written Gradual Love is. The pacing, the character development , the conflict, the way it flows; I could go on and on.

It is the best Goku/Chi-Chi story I've come across and I only wish that it could've been finished.

A true joy to read.

You can write.

And not in that you write well for Fanfiction kind of way. You can write period. And that is a rare talent to find around here.
icecream26 chapter 7 . 12/20/2013
ZOMG I love this story ! You don't know how long I've been looking for a drama fic ! PLEASE UPDATE ! It's been like what, ten years ?!
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