Reviews for Mayi
Ily18 chapter 1 . 3/30/2014
I think the scene with calzona in bed killed me. Cuteness overload. I absolutely loved the bilingual thing, both the african one, and the spanish one. Absolutely adorable!
JeSee chapter 1 . 2/28/2014
I Love it is so cute & you are awesome
DarXe chapter 1 . 9/1/2012
Very sweet.
Tifus chapter 1 . 8/13/2012
love it ! D
lileyfan1415 chapter 1 . 8/8/2012

i like this one shot. it was cute
Guest chapter 1 . 8/7/2012
Very sweet story! Hope you write more!
elraz1234 chapter 1 . 8/7/2012
Cute. I like the happy little family. I'm glad you kept Mark away, which made the story a whole bunch better. :)
Guest chapter 1 . 8/7/2012
Nice story! You should definitely write more calzona. I'll admit it was a bit too fluffy for me at times, but that's just personal taste. The writing was great. So my request for your next story is something with a bit more drama or angst mixed in ;)
csmith chapter 1 . 8/7/2012
AMAZING..I just found this story and have to say that reading it put a smile on face. I loved the interaction between the girls and Sofia. So many stories don't allow for that and I really enjoyed it. I would LOVE it if you created some more stories like this!
Awesomegreys chapter 1 . 8/7/2012
Adorable! Well done with the writing and all. Hope you'll get inspired to write more other stories about the girls.