|Reviews for Fifty Shades Forgotten|
| Guest chapter 10 . 10/30/2013
I like this story line and LOVE this Christian but have to admit Ana is quite annoying and sometimes very self centered. He is trying so hard.
| suzB chapter 27 . 9/28/2013
Loved this story my all time favourite.
Are you writing anything else and putting it on fan fiction site?
I hope so, you are too good a writer not to share your talent.
PS. I don't do Facebook or any of the other sites, so please continue your writing here.
| lb69 chapter 27 . 9/28/2013
Absolutely loved your story - have read it twice. It is one of the best fanfiction stories I have ever read - you are a very talented writer. I hope you will consider writing more fifty shades fanfiction in the future.
I have to confess that I was initially a bit sceptical about a losing memory story but, given the unconventional start to Christian and Ana's relationship, it worked brilliantly.
Thanks for sharing your story.
| Guest chapter 27 . 9/25/2013
Great job of this FF! I really enjoyed it! Thank you!
| P chapter 18 . 9/25/2013
But if she is happy there.. the police can just ask some questions in private - i dont think a third party can invoke a restraining order. They have no case against him - it ll fall apart.
But yup - point taken - your story - your rules! :D
| Judy Daniel chapter 26 . 9/23/2013
gave kudos in the last review,,
my email is
would like to know if you have written anything else.
will look forward to hearing if you do.
Thank you again.
you made the story so entertaining that I had trouble turning off the computer and going to bed when I should.
you had a few minor glitches, a few sentences I would have written differently, or said in a different way, but I figure that will get straightened out in time. Good luck with all future endeavors. Kept me on the edge of my seat, and could hardly wait to get to next chapter.
| Judy Daniel chapter 25 . 9/23/2013
BRAVA, GREAT,,LOVED IT, AND DID NOT WANT IT TO END...
THANK YOU FOR MAKING IT COME OUT RIGHT...
| Judy Daniel chapter 24 . 9/23/2013
OOOH MYreading on
| Judy Daniel chapter 23 . 9/23/2013
love, love, love, this version of the story...soooo much better. Maybe old fashioned, but I am hoping it stays this way...
| Judy Daniel chapter 22 . 9/23/2013
just so glad it isn't ending yet
| Judy Daniel chapter 21 . 9/23/2013
nope,,no comments-going on,,,
| Judy Daniel chapter 20 . 9/23/2013
can't wait,,,going on-AGAIN..
| Judy Daniel chapter 19 . 9/23/2013
| Judy Daniel chapter 18 . 9/23/2013
YOU DID IT AGAIN,,,SURPRISE AFTER SURPRISE,,,
got to go on,,,,,,
| Judy Daniel chapter 17 . 9/23/2013
you are wearing me out! But I love it..this is the kind of book I can wrap my head around,,cry, get angry, feel the ache, sympathize, and -you get the picture!