|Reviews for Fifty Shades Forgotten|
| Judy Daniel chapter 10 . 9/22/2013
the fates have it in for me,,,not out for me.
| Judy Daniel chapter 9 . 9/22/2013
caused me to stand idly,,with my hands in her lap,,,,not-moved me to still
| Judy Daniel chapter 8 . 9/22/2013
going on-to see what happens...
| Judy Daniel chapter 7 . 9/22/2013
I am not a good person to be evaluating this book,,,,I am enjoying reading it way to much to give constructive criticism...so,,on to the next chapter..I hope this ends well, I will be soooo disappointed if it doesn't.
| Guest chapter 6 . 9/22/2013
"your husband speaks the world of you",,,should be written differently,,,"your husband THINKS the world of you",
"it elates me to look after you",,,"it pleases me to look after you"...
I am STILL reading,,and excited for the next chapter,,let's move on please...
| Judy Daniel chapter 5 . 9/22/2013
a few minor mistakes, but fixable...and am now going to next chapter,,,and believe me, if I didn't like it I would just stop reading...
| Judy Daniel chapter 4 . 9/22/2013
just a few mis-spelled words or in the wrong context, but I am one who reads as it should be so it is hard to tell anyone what is wrong when I am reading it right..
I have always wanted to be a proofreader...may not be the best job for me because of the above mentioned trait.
| Judy Daniel chapter 2 . 9/22/2013
Oh, My Gosh,,I went from crying to pity, to shock, to sympathy, not necessarily in that order, in just a very few minutes of reading,,
going to NEXT chapter...
| Judy Daniel chapter 1 . 9/22/2013
I really get into the books I read,, and I did with this chapter,,didn't want to stop and write the review, but when I got to the next chapter and saw that you seemed to want input-I am back..
I am loving it. It has all the love of the first books, and more, with Teddy..
now I am going back to the second chapter and see what happens.
| Carrie Garcia chapter 11 . 9/24/2013
Sound like they are both in exploding matches.
| Carrie Garcia chapter 10 . 9/24/2013
Hmmm I think its the opposite. I think if he shows her the playroom it will jog her memory. He shouldn't be hiding things from her for fear.
| Carrie Garcia chapter 3 . 9/24/2013
Wow I cant imagine getting amnesia and not remembering.
| Carrie Garcia chapter 2 . 9/24/2013
First I didn't even know this stories existed for Fifty Shades,, but I am happy the do. As for this chapter well I still see Edward as Christian lol but as for the chapter,, I was actually sobbing. It was hard to read that is for sure. the loss of the baby was so hard but I had a feeling she would have amnesia.
| P chapter 9 . 9/21/2013
Wow...! Oh WOW...!
I have read more than 30 fanfiction novels just on fifty shades.. but man! Is this the BEST!
AWESOME.. amazing! The way you have woven the intricacies.. Your story.. the details..the feelings.. the fears.. love.. confusions.. hesitancies.. longingness.. WOW..!WOW..! I started ur novel today - and havent been able to put it down! WOW..!
Amazingly beautiful..! Its like meeting Ana n Christian for the First time - Again :)
| Guest chapter 27 . 9/18/2013
Loved this epilogue. Thanks.