|Reviews for Family Portrait|
| sarah4steve chapter 7 . 9/15/2013
Great chapter can't wait for more hope its soon
| Guest chapter 6 . 5/24/2013
hope there more soon great story
| sarah riddle chapter 6 . 5/24/2013
hope there is more soon great story
| LostInAGoodBook chapter 6 . 5/23/2013
I love this! It's beautifully written and it's full of emotion and lovely sweet moments between Nick and Yvonne. I love the flashbacks and the fact that you alternate between Nick and Yvonne's POVs. It's clear just how much they love each other.
I'm looking forward to the next installment.
| Checky chapter 5 . 3/25/2013
Hey, it's Checky (Starry Skies Up Above/ imagining impossibility) and I'm sorry I haven't reviewed in ages, I've just been ill and... ill and I suppose you could say busy but I was more busy with being ill than anything!
Anyway, onto the (absolutely marvellous) story! The last sentence was just asdfghjkl... I loved it, ok? I think it made my heart melt :') You write them so wonderfully and the whole atmosphere of the story is light yet angsty, I don't think I'll ever quite recover from the cuteness overdose I received on reading the last line! This has really made my day, honestly. The story is consistently well written and the whole thing as made me look like a Cheshire cat, seriously, I think this grin is permanently implanted on my face :P
Thank you so much for making my day xD
| LostInAGoodBook chapter 5 . 1/23/2013
I love this! Fantastic writing, lots of emotion and humour too. I love the flashbacks to their first date and the coffee scene in the previous chapter.
This last sentence is so beautiful and eloquent:
"With big smiles on both our faces I wheel Yvonne through the door, safe in the knowledge that as long as we have each other, we can get through anything as long as we were together. All we have to do now is hold on to each other and keep one another alive. Our hearts beat as one now... "
| RacingRosso chapter 5 . 1/22/2013
Excuse me whilst I practically explode over how adorable those last two lines are :P "All we have to do now is hold on to each other and keep one another alive. Our hearts beat as one now..." Can't quite coherently explain just how brilliantly cute I think that bit is. Bless them.
This fic is brilliant, you've got them in character so well. I love that Yvonne wants to sneak out of the hospital, that is so her and it's great that a little bit of her personality is beginning to shine through again.
The flashback to the date episode is fantastic, I love how you've added Nick's thoughts to it - it's great to see his take on it.
Your writing is fantastic, you really portray Yvonne's fear, her mixed emotions and how Nick reacts to them so well. It really is brilliant.
Again, this was an amazing update. I am so intrigued as to where this is going and I can't wait to see what happens next.
Keep up the good work :)
| WritingWhat'sOnMyMind chapter 4 . 1/22/2013
Lol look forwad to reading more :)
| WritingWhat'sOnMyMind chapter 3 . 1/22/2013
In any other situation I would of hated being that nurse. Looking forward to reading more :)
| WritingWhat'sOnMyMind chapter 2 . 1/22/2013
Poor Yvvon, looking forward to reading more :)
| WritingWhat'sOnMyMind chapter 1 . 1/22/2013
Love it, looking forward to reading more :)
| RacingRosso chapter 4 . 1/7/2013
I love the fact that he is bribing her with coffee and that she's trying to resist but she just can't.
This was an emotional chapter, I really do feel so sorry for her but you write her turmoil so well. Poor Yvonne :( And poor Nick, can't be easy on him either.
Your writing is brilliant, it all goes together beautifully and I like how you've managed to inject a tiny bit of humour (using coffee as a bribery tool) in with the more emotional parts to this chapter.
That last line is brilliant, I could so imagine Nick saying that. It's really well thought out. This whole fic is amazing, you're a fabulous writer and I honestly cannot wait to see where you're taking this.
Looking forward to the update.
| RacingRosso chapter 3 . 12/27/2012
Firstly, poor Yvonne :( Love the fact that Nick climbed in next to her and then got told off by the nurse the next morning. His thoughts about the nurse and the fact that it got him thinking about his own bedside manner is really quite amusing.
This chapter was great, I love the little snapshots from their relationship that you include and the way that you've managed to entwine a bit of humor (Nick's thoughts about the nurse) with the more serious parts is brilliant. You're a great writer and I can't wait to see where this goes.
Looking forward to the next update, this story is amazing. Well done and keep up the good work.
| LostInAGoodBook chapter 3 . 12/22/2012
I like how you alternate between Nick and Yvonne's points of view, it's interesting to read from both their perspectives. I'm looking forward to the next update, I love this fic!
| chrissieee chapter 3 . 12/22/2012
I love this story.
I love the way you've referenced actual episodes and you've got the characters just right.
That nurse seems like a bit of a jobsworth but you get them everywhere. :)