|Reviews for Family Portrait|
| HowCanITellYu chapter 12 . 1/25
Such a cute story :)
| blissfullyme chapter 12 . 1/24
I thought this was a very engaging, if a little idealistic story. It's a story of triumph over adversity, and it's always nice to have a happy ending.
| cooper1eddie2 chapter 11 . 1/23
Look forward to more great chapter
| cooper1eddie2 chapter 10 . 1/23
Look forward to more
| LostInAGoodBook chapter 8 . 7/26/2014
I'm so pleased to see you've updated this fic! As always, the writing is excellent, and it was interesting to read about Yvonne's past too. A lot of Casualty's recurring characters tend to be one-dimensional, but Yvonne was brilliantly written, and you write her character so well too. I like good characterisation in fanfiction.
| cooper1eddie2 chapter 8 . 7/24/2014
Great chapter look forward to more
| cooper1eddie2 chapter 7 . 9/15/2013
Great chapter can't wait for more hope its soon
| Guest chapter 6 . 5/24/2013
hope there more soon great story
| sarah riddle chapter 6 . 5/24/2013
hope there is more soon great story
| LostInAGoodBook chapter 6 . 5/23/2013
I love this! It's beautifully written and it's full of emotion and lovely sweet moments between Nick and Yvonne. I love the flashbacks and the fact that you alternate between Nick and Yvonne's POVs. It's clear just how much they love each other.
I'm looking forward to the next installment.
| Checky chapter 5 . 3/25/2013
Hey, it's Checky (Starry Skies Up Above/ imagining impossibility) and I'm sorry I haven't reviewed in ages, I've just been ill and... ill and I suppose you could say busy but I was more busy with being ill than anything!
Anyway, onto the (absolutely marvellous) story! The last sentence was just asdfghjkl... I loved it, ok? I think it made my heart melt :') You write them so wonderfully and the whole atmosphere of the story is light yet angsty, I don't think I'll ever quite recover from the cuteness overdose I received on reading the last line! This has really made my day, honestly. The story is consistently well written and the whole thing as made me look like a Cheshire cat, seriously, I think this grin is permanently implanted on my face :P
Thank you so much for making my day xD
| LostInAGoodBook chapter 5 . 1/23/2013
I love this! Fantastic writing, lots of emotion and humour too. I love the flashbacks to their first date and the coffee scene in the previous chapter.
This last sentence is so beautiful and eloquent:
"With big smiles on both our faces I wheel Yvonne through the door, safe in the knowledge that as long as we have each other, we can get through anything as long as we were together. All we have to do now is hold on to each other and keep one another alive. Our hearts beat as one now... "
| RacingRosso chapter 5 . 1/22/2013
Excuse me whilst I practically explode over how adorable those last two lines are :P "All we have to do now is hold on to each other and keep one another alive. Our hearts beat as one now..." Can't quite coherently explain just how brilliantly cute I think that bit is. Bless them.
This fic is brilliant, you've got them in character so well. I love that Yvonne wants to sneak out of the hospital, that is so her and it's great that a little bit of her personality is beginning to shine through again.
The flashback to the date episode is fantastic, I love how you've added Nick's thoughts to it - it's great to see his take on it.
Your writing is fantastic, you really portray Yvonne's fear, her mixed emotions and how Nick reacts to them so well. It really is brilliant.
Again, this was an amazing update. I am so intrigued as to where this is going and I can't wait to see what happens next.
Keep up the good work :)
| WritingWhat'sOnMyMind chapter 4 . 1/22/2013
Lol look forwad to reading more :)
| WritingWhat'sOnMyMind chapter 3 . 1/22/2013
In any other situation I would of hated being that nurse. Looking forward to reading more :)