Reviews for The First Real Date
Jaz chapter 7 . 7/30
yes i do and 2 sounds good to me! as long as the rating doesn't go up to an M then im good :P also gr8 story btw, keep writing! xD xP
Guest chapter 7 . 4/1
I think you should do it there are not so much storys about the love of mel and joe. Hope you do it. Really like your Story :)
Allison.eisen2 chapter 7 . 3/29
Write a love scene that is a 4
beulah2013 chapter 7 . 11/12/2013
beulah2013 chapter 6 . 11/12/2013
I felt like it was too emotional but I'm pretty shy and tend to not let people in.
guest chapter 7 . 8/18/2013
what happened to the last chapter. it was there before.
Guest chapter 7 . 7/19/2013
Great story! Please write more chapters
guest chapter 7 . 6/22/2013
make it a 3
Anon chapter 7 . 6/14/2013
4 to 5
jcarter920 chapter 7 . 6/7/2013
I enjoy your writing. Something I find interesting is you really let the reader know the thoughts going through a character's head, and not just one character but multiple characters. It gives a deeper meaning to the dialogue. Keep writing!
Emily125 chapter 2 . 3/30/2013
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Guest chapter 2 . 10/4/2012
This is an awesome story. I like it so far.
BellaItaliana93 chapter 8 . 9/6/2012
Wow, pretty graphic ending, but the story itself was really good!:) Can't wait to read your next stories!:)
kelli maguire chapter 8 . 9/6/2012
I liked this story a whole lot, and I like the concept of your new plot for another story. Maybe for an idea Lennox and Ryder can lie to Mel and Lie to Joe and have them meet somewhere, and Idk. I need to think of better ideas lol. Hope to see your new story in the future :)
Blakley chapter 7 . 8/31/2012
2 sounds great! Thus is a great story. Please keep writing.
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