Reviews for The First Real Date
beulah2013 chapter 7 . 11/12/2013
beulah2013 chapter 6 . 11/12/2013
I felt like it was too emotional but I'm pretty shy and tend to not let people in.
guest chapter 7 . 8/18/2013
what happened to the last chapter. it was there before.
Guest chapter 7 . 7/19/2013
Great story! Please write more chapters
guest chapter 7 . 6/22/2013
make it a 3
Anon chapter 7 . 6/14/2013
4 to 5
jcarter920 chapter 7 . 6/7/2013
I enjoy your writing. Something I find interesting is you really let the reader know the thoughts going through a character's head, and not just one character but multiple characters. It gives a deeper meaning to the dialogue. Keep writing!
Emily125 chapter 2 . 3/30/2013
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Guest chapter 2 . 10/4/2012
This is an awesome story. I like it so far.
BellaItaliana93 chapter 8 . 9/6/2012
Wow, pretty graphic ending, but the story itself was really good!:) Can't wait to read your next stories!:)
kelli maguire chapter 8 . 9/6/2012
I liked this story a whole lot, and I like the concept of your new plot for another story. Maybe for an idea Lennox and Ryder can lie to Mel and Lie to Joe and have them meet somewhere, and Idk. I need to think of better ideas lol. Hope to see your new story in the future :)
Blakley chapter 7 . 8/31/2012
2 sounds great! Thus is a great story. Please keep writing.
rosemusic20 chapter 7 . 9/1/2012
if you wanted to. You could probably end it right now. Although if you did decide to continue, i would keep reading
Guest chapter 7 . 8/28/2012
Love scene. 2 or maybe 3.
BellaItaliana93 chapter 7 . 8/28/2012
Loved the chapter. It was different than most stories, too. Keep up the good writing. can't wait to read the rest of the chapters. :) As far as your question, on a scale of 1-5, I would say a 3. :)
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