Reviews for Diem Schlotfaz, Rare Hunter Extraordinaire
Devil's pen chapter 17 . 3/15/2015
Not far into it yet, but I thought I should say something. This is definitely very good literature. I very much enjoy reading it. However, I have one recommendation. The parts that are "boring"/irrelevant to the story move to quickly. Try putting just a dash more of detail in those parts. It always helps with suspense and usually the background it gives makes it easier for readers to relate to the characters. But still very good writing.
FrozenNote chapter 27 . 3/12/2013
It's fine to take a while to update, we all have lives after all! Another great chapter (:
TheAverIn chapter 26 . 1/16/2013
Guest chapter 25 . 12/24/2012
diem is the best character ever!
kayleah chapter 24 . 12/14/2012
great chapter though a bit short
James Birdsong chapter 23 . 12/3/2012
Great and excellent story
The Duelist's Heiress chapter 22 . 10/28/2012
If I know Ishizu, that's not all of it. And if I know Marik, that's not all of it either.

I have to wonder why he's hiding information and yet I feel as though I know fully well why.

Great job.

FrozenNote chapter 22 . 10/28/2012
Why do I think they will go separate ways for a while...

Well done once again!
TheAverIn chapter 22 . 10/27/2012
Nice lol.
The Duelist's Heiress chapter 21 . 10/23/2012
Hmmmm... The museum scene was amazing. Well that is certainly going to put a wrench in the equation...

I love it. Update soon.

The Duelist's Heiress chapter 20 . 10/22/2012
I am so glad you gave us a why. Now it makes more sense. Oooh this is gonna be good.

The Duelist's Heiress chapter 19 . 10/22/2012
I still don't know how I feel about this... this whole relationship is going a bit quicker than I would like, but it is your story so, I shouldn't be dissatisfied. After all, you're writing for you. I would like some introspection from both Diem and Marik... but that's just me.

Great job.

The Duelist's Heiress chapter 18 . 10/22/2012
I read this a few weeks ago and something still doesn't sit well with me... it seems a bit too quick... or too soon perhaps... It could be that I'm not used to seeing Marik so to the point and that's sort of an issue on my part...

It's a great fic, I just sorta think this came a little early...

Onto the next chapter.

TheAverIn chapter 21 . 10/21/2012
Nice chapter lol love Marik! _
LunaNightfang20 chapter 21 . 10/21/2012
Ur doin a great job buddy :) it up
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