Reviews for Broken
magicreaderandwriter chapter 28 . 8/12/2013
I really like this story
adamtorresrules8 chapter 28 . 7/10/2013
Where's Adam Torres in your story here "Broken" anyway? Peacefully, adamtorresrules88
adamtorresrules8 chapter 25 . 6/30/2013
In your next chapter please put Adam Torres into your story "Broken" please and thank you. Peacefully, adamtorresrules88!
cliffhanger girl chapter 25 . 6/30/2013
Loved it! Update soon!
Jyoti chapter 1 . 2/17/2013
Wonderful job, I really loved it.
degrassiluver18 chapter 23 . 1/5/2013
Love can't wait for more!
june chapter 1 . 1/4/2013
i hate it
ijb1014 chapter 23 . 1/4/2013
Wow I could really feel that chapter. U really put in good visuals so that we could see it in our mind. Update soon!
HNY chapter 21 . 1/1/2013
this is amazing!
ijb1014 chapter 21 . 12/30/2012
Hey aga
liz p chapter 20 . 12/30/2012
i like the entire story ;) keep it up
ijb1014 chapter 20 . 12/29/2012
That was really good! I love the way u explained Anya's lip story. It really cleared up some of my confusion. Btw thx for updating so quickly. That may be one reason ppl like ur story so much. It shows that u actually care about ur story rather than updating when u feel like it. Great job again! Update soon!
i 3 u chapter 19 . 12/29/2012
i luv you ... i mean ur writing
Guest chapter 19 . 12/29/2012
eli and clare did not come out in this chapter why ?
jessica chapter 4 . 12/27/2012
I really like the story concept a lot and its interesting and I'm being honest when i tell you that your writing style, all the grammatical errors really take away from your ideas its distracting. You should consider letting someone edit before you submit it...but keep writing I enjoy the story it's just difficult to follow with the mistakes. sorry just constructive criticism.
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