|Reviews for Hide but go seek|
| Gemini97 chapter 4 . 9/25/2014
You updated! Frabjous day calloo callay! *eyes narrow* I am expecting more from you soon! I need to know what happens next, so I shall badger you until the next chapter is up!
Fun Danny: Uh, dude, don’t use the word badger! That’s so not cool!
Oh, quiet, Danny. You know I don’t mean it in that context!
Until next time ;)
| didyoumissme chapter 2 . 8/16/2012
So far i like it. Cant wait to see where you take it. :)
| Gemini97 chapter 2 . 8/13/2012
Another good chapter! Can't wait to see what happens next
| Gemini97 chapter 1 . 8/7/2012
YAY! I'm the first to review! :D Thanks for the shoutout! I'm glad you uploaded it! It's awesome and I can't wait till you next upload!
Well, the only thing I want to suggest is the dialogue. When a new person begins taliking, put it in another paragraph. It improves how it flows.
But, other than that, I'm gonna give you a big two thumbs up, friend! from what I've read so far, this is really great and I can't wait to see where you take this