|Reviews for Indiana Jones: The Temple of Doom|
| Whitwhit1893 chapter 6 . 3/22/2014
My biggest issue with each and every single one of your Indy fics, is that it isn't really a fic. With the exception of some dialogue not being part of the original script, the fact stands that your Indy fics are copy-and-paste style story. I know you've mentioned several time that you tend write these with a lazy set of mind. With that said, here's my other issue. You have an OC, but you haven't provided any sort of development to make me even sympathize with her. Indy may be a bit of a promiscuous man, but the relationship between the two makes it justified for him to be promiscuous. It's so random for her to shout "I love you" when there was never any development that left me thinking they should be together. Your...pardon me, "your" Indy fics should be taken more seriously because otherwise it's just a bland, underdeveloped, copy-and-paste story.
| Katerina Vitani chapter 6 . 1/13/2014
Do it. Write it. Just do it! jk but seriously. It would be awesome if you could do a short story on the way to Delhi.
| Person chapter 6 . 9/9/2013
I personally think that it should have enede differently, like maybe mola ram could kill eva and the shock of that would wake indy from the black sleep of kali, just a suggestion
| talk-ape chapter 1 . 5/8/2013
All of this is really awesome
| suntan140 chapter 6 . 8/27/2012