|Reviews for The Princess and The Bat|
| Yuki Niwa chapter 14 . 12/6/2013
Hey i like your story but i hope there will be some bruce pov sometime cause i would like to know how he thinks about laney
| lexzly chapter 14 . 10/26/2013
i love your story.. especially laney whenever tantrums strikes her hahaha
| kindleflame5 chapter 14 . 9/25/2013
Great chapter! Please let Delaney kick some butt!
| Hermione02 chapter 14 . 9/23/2013
Yeah, a new chapter! This made my day.
| highlander348 chapter 14 . 9/23/2013
Well it's good Bruce will realize that someone is there for him and does love him even if Laney is not totally aware of it yet. Same with Bruce. I always thought it was kind of moronic how Bruce was so into Rachel like a love sick puppy when it was clear she never loved him back not accepted him for who he was. What a lost cause.
Quick question. Does Laney at least know how to defend herself if she was attacked? If not could Bruce show her a few pointers? It would be another way for them to get closer. Please think about it and update soon. Cheers!
| ZabuzasGirl chapter 14 . 9/22/2013
Update immediately, please!
| 252020 chapter 13 . 9/21/2013
This has promise :D
| kindleflame5 chapter 13 . 9/8/2013
Well just update when you can. No worries Brooke! Though I wish Bruce and Delaney get together soon. I think that Christopher fellow is shady. Am I right? :)
| amsr chapter 13 . 9/7/2013
buenisimo, como actuara bruce ahora, ana maria
| ZabuzasGirl chapter 13 . 9/7/2013
Update immediately, please!
| highlander348 chapter 13 . 9/7/2013
Good chapter! Hope to see more. Cheers!
| kindleflame5 chapter 12 . 7/20/2013
I don't think it matters all that much if some thugs hear Batman talking to himself when he is actually talking to Delaney when he is out in the field. They will figure one of two things. Either he is nuts or he has a partner helping him. Plus there is no way anybody should be able to hear Delaney's voice coming out of that communicator in Batman's ear unless they have superhearing. So Batman telling her to be quite at times lest somebody overhear is not logical. Just pointing that out. I do enjoy Delaney's running commentary and find it funny and cute.
Any chance she could drive the Tumbler at some point? I would love to see how she drives it! Tootles!
| sarahslushie711 chapter 12 . 7/16/2013
I like Delaney, how she isn't afraid to freak out at times, yet is entirely capable.
I wish she would show her smarts more- that moment in the cave with her comment about the railroads was probably the best one yest.
She's original and constant, which is very good.
Her mum seems grand.
Although, your Alfred is a bit off. I mean, there are many different portrayals of the bloke, all of which give him a much cooler, tougher background. In the original comics, he's an actor/ intel agent who goes to work for Bruce after his father, Jarvis, makes a death bed request for him to continue the family tradition. In another adaptation, he becomes friends with Thomas Wayne while he is in the Royal Marines, and he looses a leg when saving Thomas' life. Thomas gifts him a prosthetic leg, and when Thomas is running for mayor years later and Alfred comes to visit, Alfred is concerned for his safety and Thomas goes to the movies anyway. That night, after the mugging, he is shocked to discover Thomas and Martha listed him as guardian. Another version has him as having been a medic in the RAF and as ex-British Secret Service. He's awesome and muscular in that one. In The Dark Knight, he mentions his military life when comparing Joker to an ex-foe, saying some "just want to watch the world burn."
There is debate over his real name too, by the Nolan-verse general has him as Alfred J. Pennyworth, which is similar to all the comics, which have him as Alfred Pennyworth and goes by Beagle as his actor name. Accept, they have on his tombstone in a discontinued, exclusive line. And in some comics, Pennyworth was the name he took for intelligence work, based on a comment from his handler that his life was not even worth a penny .
So, yeah... if this is useful in any sense, I'm glad to help. If not, well, it's still interesting, I hope.
If you have any questions, I would be glad to lend a hand.
Other than that, it's a darling story you have here, and thank you for a job well-done.
| Jasmine Scarthing chapter 11 . 7/14/2013
Nice! Good chapter.
| Jasmine Scarthing chapter 1 . 7/14/2013
Great story :)