Reviews for Remaking a Saber and her Sheath
Fredrickson the 96th chapter 6 . 9/10
Aww... Though the writing was a little off and you kept making the same grammar mistakes, this still was a very enjoyable story! Sad that it's been abandoned...
*adding it to the looooong list of abandoned stories with potential*
Anyway... should you ever consider picking this back up again, please do! I would volunteer as a beta reader if you'd like me to.
Souls of the damned chapter 4 . 12/2/2016
wrong spelling you spelled read as reed at the end of the chapter
fanfic reader chapter 1 . 9/25/2015
did kiritsugu teach shiro anything else besides the basics of magecraft e.g runes, alchemy, non-elemental magecraft, formalcraft etc
Noitaerc chapter 6 . 3/15/2015
Why did you stop writing, why? (Insert tears)
This is a great story, it should be completed.
Guest chapter 1 . 12/21/2014
fable 3 is not fable
Guest chapter 6 . 10/31/2014
good story. hope you update soon and make more omakes. maybe you could make an omake where the the little shirou and arturia go to teen shirou's school.
Angel Thera chapter 6 . 9/21/2014
Nice Fanfic. I am really wanting to see more of this.
Guest chapter 6 . 6/4/2014
Plz revive this story, it's one of the few good Fable crosses.
Guest chapter 6 . 5/29/2014
i got an idea for your next omake. have mini-shirou and mini-arturia appear in older shirou's school
Kerashana chapter 6 . 1/31/2013
This is a great story. Here's to hoping it doesn't die.
Taeniaea chapter 6 . 12/16/2012
cool chapter silly Arturia ,and her love for lions *lol*
Orez Lanrete chapter 6 . 11/30/2012
Why do I have the feeling everybody have been reborned in this world
Archer0 chapter 6 . 11/9/2012
This is quite interesting i'm liking the story so far i love your little extras at the end brilliant especially that gilgamesh one in the last chapter
JinzoMask656 chapter 6 . 10/22/2012
Where is more!? Please update and thanks for the great chapter!
Stabr OpSihg chapter 6 . 10/18/2012
This a very interesting story, just read all of it up to chapter 6. I really like how you written it so you can imagine anything you want for the King and Queen, I keep imagining my Weekend Shadow Worshiping Cleaver-wielding masked Gunslinger/wizard/Assassin hero and the no-nonsense (regular) girl from old Westcliff from my run through Fable II for the King and Queen, I think that is really a plus. I also liked that the traits that each of the reborn characters are being expressed and perfected at a young age, that will get very interesting when they get to the start of Fable III.

Although I think that Shirou and Arturia growing up just the Fable III hero is a fun and cute ride, I need to ask, When do we see the 'action'? I mean the action of them seriously fighting and their 'relationship when their older'. And concerning the fighting, will Shirou somehow get to use a bow despite guns being the norm, you know stay close to what Archer does? Also does both Nasuverse magecraft (like Unlimited Blade Works) and Fable Will powers (like Blades and maybe even ones from previous games) appear?

My only complaint is just me being impatient for the (serious) Action/Violence, I can wait as long as the story stays strong, which it is. It would be neat to see more elements of Fate/Stay Night story (like why/how Ilya is there) mix with the Fable III storyline. Overall the writing is great, and the story is well thought out, executed, and has great gags along the way.

Looking forward to more fun, hilarious, and intriguing chapters/story; and the effects of the queens 'departure'.

P.S those Outro and Comic Sidestory things at the end of each chapter are really fun. Also If there isn't Action/Violence, I think I'd be great with that.
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