|Reviews for Ghostly Games|
| Guest chapter 2 . 1/6
You're sick for using real people in your fanfiction. :( If you got something against someone, say it to them directly. Don't hide behind the Internet and cyber bully them.
| Ani-DP-TT-PJ-H-Ben10 Fan chapter 24 . 11/15/2013
Awesome story! I loved it! Can't wait for more!
| Tiddly Winks III chapter 1 . 10/14/2013
I like the story so far, but to say Jazz never stood a chance when pitted inside the Hunger Games arena sounded unfair. I understand Danny is the main character, but that to me it sounded like he lacked a lot of faith in his older sister. Danny also sounds like he's full of himself is also what I'm trying to get at. I know he's a caring brother, but that's too much even for me.
| tehairbendingdemighost chapter 1 . 10/7/2013
I am very close to stop reading. The girl.
| inviso-bella chapter 6 . 9/25/2013
words can not describe how good the story is
| IceChild and ThePuppetMaster chapter 1 . 7/20/2013
This is just what I was looking for! YESSSSSSS!
| Guest chapter 2 . 7/2/2013
You've got some good things going on in this story (particularly the beginnings of a doozy of a moral dilemma, always great stuff for a hero story), but there's a couple of glaring things that detract from them:
1) the 'info dump' writing style of this chapter is pretty off-putting. My advice would be to show readers how Danny learns all these things about each tribute, rather than just telling us. Trust us to be smart enough to draw the right conclusions from Danny's judgment-free observations of stuff that happens around and to him. (As an added bonus, Danny won't come off as quite so arrogant and judgmental if you let us decide that, for example, Sarah is a 'complete bitch' after she does something that only a complete bitch would do, like dump food in someone's lap or something)
2) I'm having trouble believing Danny could be this cold and calculating (if you intended to write him OOC, then ignore this point and maybe put a warning about that in the summary or first chapter AN). The Danny I know from the show would more likely be plotting how to get everyone to safety without revealing himself, instead of thinking thoughts like 'they sure as hell wouldn't survive if I had anything to say about it' about other human beings
Again, there's a lot of potential here, and clearly a lot of people have enjoyed your story, so I'm not saying it's bad. I'm just saying that it would be even better if these two points weren't weighing it down. Good luck in all your future writing endeavors.
| Smeet16 chapter 10 . 6/18/2013
Rachel: captain obvious! Man that was faster then I thought he would revele himself! 0_o
| Smeet16 chapter 1 . 6/18/2013
Keep going it was great ( not for danny but great for readers )
| Fleur chapter 5 . 5/31/2013
Ahh yes people hitting people isnt there anything more beautiful XP
| FleurXDanny chapter 11 . 3/21/2013
| DPsketch chapter 24 . 11/29/2012
Alright so I hate the Hunger Games but love this. Weird. Anyways I loved it! Awesome job on it!
| Universal808 chapter 23 . 11/23/2012
Yay! Fish and Ben survived! Sorry I couldn't review the others, my iPad is running on low battery, and the charger is no where to be seen! I've seen this story many times, but I never bothered to read it until now, but I think I've made the right decision cuz this story is AWESOME! You've earned yourself a favorite! Wow, I've favorites a story with a bunch of swear words. What are the odds?
| Red Lightning Bolt chapter 24 . 11/20/2012
I will definitely read it.
| 1000Nachts chapter 1 . 11/19/2012
It seems to jitter between backgrounds of Hunger Games and Amity Park. It's okay for a start, I suppose, but I'm feeling a little bit of inconsistency. Maybe I should reread the chapter, for comprehension.