|Reviews for The More Loving One|
| Chillnmonkey chapter 1 . 6/19
The story was great, love your work. But the last part got me, I couldn't stop laughing.
| Paulie MickeyJ chapter 1 . 5/19
Wow. This story was awesome! And the lemon! Great characterisation and the ending, dirty text! Priceless! Thank you for writing such nice tale.
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/1
Ahhhh I got your Sherlock reference [';
| Yudra chapter 1 . 8/24/2015
I loved this ish xD I was just as confused as Luffy with the medical stuff! "Does that turn you on?"
| poyochin chapter 1 . 5/20/2015
The text messages at the end was really funny. Luffy does have issues with poop. Anyway, this fic might be three years ago or so but hey, it made my day today.
| LunaSkye23 chapter 1 . 3/14/2015
HEYYYY I LOVE HOW YOU PORTRAY LAW HERE! THIS STORY IS SO CUTE! GOOD JOB! :D
| Yuki Artsa chapter 1 . 2/3/2015
OH GOD THAT ENDING, I AM EATING MY PILLOW TO MUFFLE MY LAUGHTER RIGHT NOW XD
damnit author-san, you've made me want to write a lawlu lemon involving candy cos that is the perfect way to show the world i am a perverted, single, hormone-raging teen who would jump doflamingo at first sight XD (true)
| Yuu Hoshimura chapter 1 . 8/24/2014
it made me laugh big time XD
| yuyane chapter 1 . 8/10/2014
Haha, that ending! This was a great read!
| Eira chapter 1 . 7/16/2014
This was so sweet! It made me smile, thank you. : )
| fangirlhaven chapter 1 . 5/13/2014
Dirty text message:poop XD
| sisimiura chapter 1 . 4/9/2014
luffy :D :D :D
| cellaria chapter 1 . 3/22/2014
Kinda weird...lol but there were hot & cute parts XD
| EvelyLime chapter 1 . 2/24/2014
That ending XDD
| July's fantasies chapter 1 . 2/11/2014
OMG so hilRious! Well at the end anws. I love your version of lawlu! I'm gonna follow u xD