|Reviews for The More Loving One|
| poyochin chapter 1 . 5/20
The text messages at the end was really funny. Luffy does have issues with poop. Anyway, this fic might be three years ago or so but hey, it made my day today.
| LunaSkye23 chapter 1 . 3/14
HEYYYY I LOVE HOW YOU PORTRAY LAW HERE! THIS STORY IS SO CUTE! GOOD JOB! :D
| Yuki Artsa chapter 1 . 2/3
OH GOD THAT ENDING, I AM EATING MY PILLOW TO MUFFLE MY LAUGHTER RIGHT NOW XD
damnit author-san, you've made me want to write a lawlu lemon involving candy cos that is the perfect way to show the world i am a perverted, single, hormone-raging teen who would jump doflamingo at first sight XD (true)
| Yuu Hoshimura chapter 1 . 8/24/2014
it made me laugh big time XD
| yuyane chapter 1 . 8/10/2014
Haha, that ending! This was a great read!
| Eira chapter 1 . 7/16/2014
This was so sweet! It made me smile, thank you. : )
| fangirlhaven chapter 1 . 5/13/2014
Dirty text message:poop XD
| sisimiura chapter 1 . 4/9/2014
luffy :D :D :D
| cellaria chapter 1 . 3/22/2014
Kinda weird...lol but there were hot & cute parts XD
| kikilalakia1 chapter 1 . 2/24/2014
That ending XDD
| July's fantasies chapter 1 . 2/11/2014
OMG so hilRious! Well at the end anws. I love your version of lawlu! I'm gonna follow u xD
| KyotoXoX chapter 1 . 1/9/2014
Awesome. I was smiling the whole time.
| PurpleDoubt chapter 1 . 1/2/2014
I might be taking too much of a liking to your writing and fics.
The way you portrayed Law was really good and on spot, Luffy, too, (though I'm not sure how I ever imagined him in a sex-situation).
There were a few missing words, aside that I didn't find spelling or grammar mistakes.
| MisakiXRevive chapter 1 . 1/1/2014
*facepalms and laughes*
| LunarStar98 chapter 1 . 10/30/2013
XD loved the ending so cute and funny! please make more like this, it was really good!