|Reviews for What it takes to win|
| thepkrmgc chapter 2 . 8/19
not sure if i like this caster, she kind of comes out of nowhere and her cheerfulness is obnoxious
| thepkrmgc chapter 1 . 8/19
for a shirou obsessed with finding hi sister, its odd that he cant recognize her
| ScorpionsBane chapter 11 . 1/12
I just wanted to say I greatly enjoyed reading this. You may never continue it but it is still a great story either way.
| CD123505 chapter 11 . 8/21/2016
Please continue this story its very interesting and a very interesting plot
| Bunny153539 chapter 11 . 5/13/2016
So you end this gold with a cliffhanger like that?! Is this the apocalypse? That's what it is... Isn't it? It's not a cliffhanger, they all die?!
| Bunny153539 chapter 1 . 5/12/2016
Light hearted? And how many paragraphs prior had two men talking about the brutal rape a third man was commiting on said mans younger sister?
| dark.muktadir chapter 5 . 1/29/2016
Nothing aside from unlimited zelretch gem blade works, wielded by aoko and arcuid, aimed by shiki and powered my unlimited prana from tamamo can end this madness...
| dark.muktadir chapter 1 . 1/29/2016
Reads chapter 1, finds everything promising, prepares for the incomparable bloodbath/shitfest with edgiya shirou... A/N says its gonna be a light hearted story. WTF with this as the setting?! What sorcery is this? I am not so sure about this story anymore...
| Guest chapter 4 . 1/11/2016
Err, saber went 'nanaaanananaaa' when Rin or whoever explained the evil bit or something? Else, why not any reference to it?
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/11/2016
To be honest though, it could be better. The messenger guy, is he relevant, or just a set piece? And what the heck is the deal with mystery voice one. Mystery voice two is clearly Zouken, so wait... The association is in on it, or not, because messenger may or may not be really a part of it, but either way is an outright liar.
Ah, not complaint for the mystery itself so much as the scene itself are often muddy.
Full stopping Mrs Shotakon (okay, not technically) was a nice touch. I wonder if Sacchin calls her sempai not because of hypnotism, but because they are stalkers-in-arms (remember, even at the beginning, 7shiki is pretty much her prime suspect) and the stalker was learning tips from the far more experienced ciel.
... The hell am I writing about?
| Guest chapter 10 . 11/17/2015
What the hell are you smoking, and where can I get some.
| ayleid chapter 5 . 11/9/2015
I know it is more on Nasu's head than yours, but the stories about bears and rabbits, to give only two examples, eating their kids, are true! I think Atalanta's wish to help children is actually her most human trait. Alternate character interpretation, I guess.
| My appreciation chapter 11 . 8/21/2015
I know you may never come back to continue this wonderful story, but I want to say thank you.
Thank you so much for all your hard work. I really appreciated that you tried your best. Thank you.
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| Jeremiah Bull chapter 9 . 3/21/2015
Well, I really like the interesting ideas Shakespeare is putting forth. More fourth wall destruction please.