Reviews for Wanting to Protect You
Shiori Ayihime chapter 1 . 12/30/2015
The lemon was great... Not too exaggerated neither too subtle...loved it! Keep up the good work! The ending isn't as sappy as you think..
zoey andgraycie chapter 1 . 8/5/2014
it was not horrible or sappy it was great
Guest chapter 1 . 7/6/2014
I really like the title of the story, fits it really well
Guest chapter 1 . 7/6/2014
The story was nice, I gueass a few typos, but what should you do? A few will always stay o.
The lemon part was nice to, wasn't really getting my juices flowing since it wasn't my taste (I'm a hardcore fan) but I am shure that a lot of reader will enjoy it
The end also wasn't sappy since no magicall rainbow with unicorns did apper but he said she was 'his own', I don't think that is sappy, therefore the end was nice too
3 of 3 points .
Rin Owens chapter 1 . 3/18/2014
That was a good lemon, but why did you have to end it? Man, this is why I hate/love one-shots.
black-angel67 chapter 1 . 9/17/2013
oh my god! Black-angel loves this!
Guest chapter 1 . 9/4/2013
Julieanne chapter 1 . 8/24/2013
I absoltely adore Rin and Len. I certainly enjoy this lemon of the two.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/22/2013
I think it was good
anonymous chapter 1 . 6/24/2013
i did not think that the end was horrible or sappy and the lemon part was ... good [ sorry sounds perverted]
meman445 chapter 1 . 5/18/2013
it was a good lemon. i think ur awesome at righting lemons. i dont think the ending was tht horrible because u only had one chapter to make and explain everything so overall i think tht it was a good ending. and overall a good story.
Guest chapter 1 . 4/13/2013
I feel bad for the people who heard...
Guest chapter 1 . 12/9/2012
Good lemon :) I like it, but I'd like it better if Len didn't pull his 'banana' out when he's about to cum so Rinny'll get pregnant xD muwahahahahaaa
96NekoThe Boss chapter 1 . 8/21/2012
Peace The WARRIOR chapter 1 . 8/17/2012
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