|Reviews for toothpaste|
| pristeen chapter 1 . 10/13/2014
*sighs* Subtle, mild. And damn, shit-fuck, this was beautiful.
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/1/2014
Wow love pinecest! Cute story. Love that ending. For anybody confused, menthol is a minty thing you find in peppermint and toothpaste. Read between the lines and you will get it. Nice fic! :)
| Proper the Incredible chapter 1 . 4/4/2013
I'm not one for Pinecest, subtle or not, but you just wrote this so nicely that I had to write a review.
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/17/2013
I do like your story here,even though I am not a twincest job!
| erlebnisse chapter 1 . 10/22/2012
this was so amazing; i love how managed to really capture Dipper and Mabel's complexity (and, aw, poor, confused Dipper)! it was brilliant. )
| Rachel chapter 1 . 9/18/2012
| Anon chapter 1 . 9/14/2012
ASDFGH THIS IS BEAUTIFUL YOU'RE BEAUTIFUL FLARGH ;W;
| ough chapter 1 . 8/23/2012
| Mister Melancholy chapter 1 . 8/10/2012
Aw, so much fluff! Good job. I really liked how much voice your story had. Dipper was just dripping with denial.
| ThatGuyWhoReadsFanfiction chapter 1 . 8/8/2012
Uh, I liked this, but I'm not sure what happened. This was a very serious fic, I think that's the source of my confusion. Could you please explain this to me?