|Reviews for The Battle at Sekigahara|
| LL chapter 1 . 10/21/2012
I appreciate the idea behind this, but I'm afraid I don't quite understand the purpose of mentioning the events of SWC in this story. You didn't mention his meeting with said main character before he ran, and in saying the teacup shattered, it is unclear if you mean he laughed because he remembered the teacup shattered, or if the teacup once again shattered, implying to the main character, wherever he/she is that Mitsunari had just been killed.
Also, I believe you are implying a guillotine was used to execute Mitsunari, but in actuality, I believe his beheading would have been carried out by sword.
| dreamlily chapter 1 . 8/18/2012
This was really good, so awesomely written! Your first, you could have fooled me! Great job! lily