Reviews for The Rightful Sky |
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Arisu Tsuranu chapter 7 . 10/23 I'm not sure if you will see this, but just in case you do… I want to let you know that this story has been near and dear to my heart for the 12 years since I started reading it when you first posted. This story of yours, your writing, kept me going through a lot of life shit I kept having to deal with. I looked forward to every single update, loving how Tsuna became more confident and sure of himself the more people believed in him and entered his life. I absolutely adore how you wrote Reborn. The type of teacher he is in your story is the one I'm trying to be right now to my students who are more Rough Around the Edges or shy and unsure of themselves (without all the violence, of course haha]. The characterization you've given everybody, makes them feel so much more alive than what I initially felt from the manga itself. I love the little nuances that you built into each character, I love how you included Mochida and gave him a personality that isn't a bumbling asshole and idiot. you've characterized him as like a big brother to Tsuna, who definitely needed somebody to look out for him. In that same vein of thought, how Tsuna Is gathering his Guardians just by being kind and appreciative of them being in his life really heals Something in My Heart rereading this the story for the many nth time. I love how everybody is 100,000% willing to throw down for this boy who believes in them, loves them, respects them, tells them until they know completely that they are fine the way they are and shouldn't morph themselves into something just to fit a terrible person's perspective of them. They are better off without people like that in their lives. I hate, like really really hate, Hiko. But that means you created somebody a character so despicable and still irredeemable in my eyes 12 years later. I may not like Hiko is the way he is, though I have some theories about why he is the way he is: being that he may have heard something when he and Tsuna were much younger, and believes that his worth is only something if compared to Tsuna in some way. Like I've always thought that Hiko hates Tsuna because of some internal comparison, that happened because he misheard or misunderstood something that Iemitsu and Nono said when they both came to visit. I really despise Iemitsu For passing up Tsuna for some brat he may have helped bring in to life but has had no hand in raising. Just…. I really thrive on the premise of this story being Tsuna finding his own resolve and naturally building his strength because he has people to look out for. I always love the idea of found family and fighting to protect those you love and this story really hits the nail and everything I look for with that premise. The little Snippets of the future that we see at the end of each chapter still has my brain worrying of what is happening in that time, I know for a fact that Hiko had a huge hand in murdering Tsuna if not was the one who did it personally. There's just a part of me that feels very happy and delighted that so many people are on Tsuna’s side, his team, going to war to avenge him, protect him because he did the same for them. My favorite parts in this story are all the scenes were Reborn contemplating why Tsuna deserves to be the candidate for Vongola, Reborn and others standing up for and protecting Tsuna from Hiko, Tsuna going into Hyper Dying Will Mode and feeling all that warmth [I still think it’s Primo talking to him] handing Hiko’s ass to him, and literally every scene where someone realized that Tsuna is a great person, so much better than his useless brother, and choosing to stand by Tsuna’s side over everything else. I really love that future snippet where all of Tsuna’s allies are like “YEAH we’re going to war, we’re gonna fuck their shit up.” I just. Ugh. so sweet. chef’s kiss. I'm not sure if you will ever see this review, I am not sure where you are currently in life, but I surely hope that you are doing well and taking care of yourself. this story you graced the fandom more than a decade ago hold a special place in all of our hearts. maybe one day this story will see continuation, maybe it won't, but I know for God damn fact that me and a lot of other readers here and very glad and appreciative that you shared wonderful worldbuilding, your impeccable writing, this amazing AU and the other stories you’ve written for the fandom .,,, with us. A Switch In Time Saves Seven is also another story that I hold dear to my heart, I will always go crazy for a well written fic where Tsuna comes in and shows everyone in the past how badass he becomes in the future. I eat all that up like a buffet. Essay review is soooo long, so I’ll end it with another thank you. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. I hope wherever you are, you’re well and healthy. Take care. 3 Arisu Tsuranu [alysii on ao3 if you decide to move everything to there on day, i’d love to leave many kudos :) ] |
Blu3b3rryT3a chapter 7 . 9/4/2023 Oh no, that's sad and heartbreaking. Hiko killed Tsuna didn't he. I can see it all too easily. Fon could teach Tsuna if Reborn can't- better suited at it too. Is Tsuna sealed? So many questions... Best of luck! |
kitten-dreamer chapter 1 . 7/8/2023 Hi - Is this story abandoned? Or has it moved posting location? It is one of my favorite online works in this fandom. I haven't seen updates in years, but I do check in on it occasionally since I liked it so much and am ever hopeful for its completion... Take care. |
MeliannYlan chapter 7 . 6/30/2023 I've stumbled on this story before and I am happy I found it again. I really like the character development that went into Tsuna, and everything that is happening. I am really thankful to you for a beautiful story, although sad that it has ended. Thank you |
Guest chapter 7 . 1/18/2023 reread this and still really enjoy this! |
Goliatth chapter 7 . 9/18/2022 Hi ! I just finished reading it. Such a beautiful story about Tsunayoshi and the building of his circle of friends that he conquered with a discreet smile and kindness. (My heart palpitates.) It's a shame that this work will never end...(I hope it's the twists and turns of real life that have kept you away.) Anyway, thank you for sharing this story with us ! (It is so inspiring.) |
RayShippouUchiha chapter 7 . 6/12/2022 This is absolutely fantastic! I love the way you've been building Tsuna up and his relationship with his slowly expanding circle. And the way Reborn can't help but grow more and more fond of him! Plus the way you brought in I-pin and Fon? Perfect! |
HuntersShadow chapter 7 . 5/2/2022 Shame this was stopped. It's getting really really good. |
yeaaaahhhh I read chapter 7 . 3/19/2022 Who ever made this I will find you and pray to God you continue this glorious work of fanfiction. |
yeaaaahhhh I read chapter 4 . 3/19/2022 A fucking Neglected Tsuna fic that actually has the terrible brother become the boss and the entire Mafia world responding negatively. why did this end so soon I want more |
lilibean chapter 7 . 1/26/2022 oh gods i'm so sad this wont be continued |
Guest chapter 7 . 12/20/2021 great story! interesting how you've interspersed it with the 10 years later perspective |
Redsy chapter 7 . 9/14/2021 hello.. i have read your story twice fever since i discovered it... i love how you potray all the characters without it being too ooc... i think the characteristic is something that could be developed if tsuna truly grow up like that and i love your kyoya... the protectiveness toward tsuna just make me hieeeeeeeeee and squel! it was too bad that the fic has been discontinued since 2012 ㅠㅠㅠ hoping you could at least write the general outline for the story progression... |
qiaraz97 chapter 7 . 9/3/2021 I know you won't be reading this. But just know it was soooo good! I would love to steal some of your ideas. Thank you for the story. |
kimchisdelicious chapter 7 . 8/4/2021 hi im here again HAHAHAH just finished rereading it, and as always, great work! i appreciate you sharing it (•ˇ_ˇ |