|Reviews for Their First|
| Aferus chapter 9 . 5/28
¡Maravilloso! ¡Fue un placer de leer las obras de usted y es un gran honor de conocer otro escritor que habla español!
Such a heartfelt and beautiful story, gentle in the right parts, and it just left you with the longing to know what happened next, you know?
I'm sad that you haven't updated this in nearly four nears now. I wish I could've been around for when this story was at its height and sent recommendations for future "Firsts", but, I'm honored and more than glad to have had the opportunity to read it.
You truly have something beautiful written here. You have the knack to pluck the right emotions from the reader, especially when you have them hooked onto the story and you drive the direction of where their emotions go from there.
Like I had said before in your other FanFic, these stories truly took me back down memory lane, and although they were about superheroes, you did an impressive job depicting the teenage experiences that I could relate to. Positively stunning, I'd say!
I hope that you will one day return and shed some light onto what their next "First" may have been. If not, then I hope you're successful in whatever ventures you decide to embark on, you left a wonderful read in the community, and I thank you!
| Guest chapter 7 . 5/2
i like how she said they couldnt kiss
| Guest chapter 9 . 12/6/2014
When's the next chapter?
| AKAThe Crusher chapter 9 . 9/24/2014
I think that your next chapter should include Nova get jealous and force White Tiger to have sex with him but later she tells Peter and he understands and wont let it happen again.
| Spiderkid24 chapter 8 . 4/22/2014
Good work keep writing more chapters
| Guest chapter 9 . 11/7/2013
Any more Ava/Peter one-shots? I love these! XD
| zero chapter 9 . 8/3/2013
Plz make more I love this story
| Princess-Girl12 chapter 9 . 6/29/2013
| The New Creed chapter 9 . 6/25/2013
This is a great story of one shots between Peter and Ava. Looking forward for more
| ArtemisBAMF1218 chapter 9 . 5/29/2013
Can u do a "First Time getting jealous" like Ava with Azari (Black Panther's son. I hear that BP was friends with the orginal WT, so they might know each other) and Peter with Black Cat.
| a fan of marvel chapter 6 . 4/27/2013
Must you end all the chapters with their titles
| 666Darkmage chapter 9 . 4/5/2013
Please tell me you are thinking of continuing. These are really good and i feel like i'm actually watching the show the way your writing it. But if i can make one suggestion, maybe make them a bit longer. Only because i really want to get into it and so it they don't end so quickly. But besides that these are awesome, you are a awesome writer and just awesome!
| nienerz chapter 9 . 4/1/2013
| Canuck101 chapter 9 . 3/11/2013
Well done, I liked this one a lot, I hope you like the Peter/Ava one I started. review if you do.
| Kidan Yoshilda chapter 9 . 3/7/2013
How far into the future do you plan on going? Because I would love for you to do more. Good job. Keep up the good work.