Reviews for For Bella
Elizabeth K chapter 1 . 5/19
Oh, that's okay, it's not like I needed my heart or anything
twiFan-1234 chapter 1 . 5/8/2014
That was beautiful 3
fourevertris chapter 1 . 12/4/2013
made me cry, but i love it
twilightjainalious chapter 1 . 5/25/2013
OMG! LOVE THIS! So detailed and it made me cry lol,Gd job!
Clarniss swayder chapter 1 . 4/30/2013
This is so good written, heartbreaking I almost started to cry!
IS WIS chapter 1 . 2/20/2013
AAAAAAAAAAGGGGGGGGGGGGGHHHHH HHHHHHHH, so sad!
Lovely piece of work, undeniable feelings and awesome writing!
Guest chapter 1 . 1/10/2013
This made me Cry it was so good
lola chapter 1 . 12/18/2012
please update soon
Guest chapter 1 . 8/24/2012
Enjoyed your story ..
sniperocker123 chapter 1 . 8/14/2012
That was really heart-felt and you could literally imagine Edward's heart breaking:(
However, this is the best one-shot I have ever read about Edward's line of thinking when he leaves Bella. Really great. Thumbs up!
nepalipranshu chapter 1 . 8/10/2012
I think this is the best Edward leaving Bella scene from Edward POV that I have ever read. I had tears in my eyes reading this.
AliceTheClueless chapter 1 . 8/9/2012
Great job! Loved it!
xxxSoulmates4everxxx chapter 1 . 8/9/2012
This was really really good. You demonstrated Edward's point of view very well. I totally loved it :)))
guardion5star chapter 1 . 8/9/2012
guardion: I love your story it is so touching

(Charlie walks in) Charlie: you idiot vampire I'm going to shoot you Edmund for making my daughter so upset
(Charlie starts shooting and axidently hits Guardion)

Guardion: AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA AAAAAAAAAH! THAT IS IT TODAY BECOMES DIE DAY!
(Guardion kills Charlie)

Edmund: Well at least we don't have to deal with him any more
(Bella walks in)

Guardion: Oh hey Bella Edmund just killed your dad

Edmund:WHAT!
RYCBARM chapter 1 . 8/9/2012
This was beautiful... Artistic and very emotionally charged. It was a pleasure to read such work! Keep writing in pov, since you are very good at it. :)