|Reviews for A Visit To The Past|
| Emma Heavens chapter 9 . 7/23/2017
Plz i just browsing and my eye caught on this. Just finish writing- please!
(Oh and i really like this idea)
| someone chapter 2 . 5/3/2017
when you introduce yourself, you usually just say your name and age and dont really reveal your likes and dislikes and your school and whether you are a prefect and stuff... or do you
| someone chapter 1 . 5/3/2017
such cliched ahhh
its so cliched i cannot
"im related to a bunch of idiots" is one of the most cliched dialogue ever in fanfiction
also the 'Ill go first and list out my name' and the listing names is another cliched thing. ive seen enough of it in percy jackson fanfics
well you have a nice idea and good plot, though you can improve on grammar and punctuation, also the clicheness.
yes dont be like me i dont put punctuation in reviews.
eg the second last sentence, which was remus' statement, it should end with a question mark because it is a question.
| Guest chapter 9 . 3/20/2017
| Scorrose Lover chapter 8 . 11/6/2016
I really liked this.
| Scorrose Lover chapter 4 . 11/6/2016
Al is actually mostly Weasley.
| Scorrose lover chapter 2 . 11/6/2016
Hugo could be any age.
| Guest chapter 9 . 6/26/2016
Do you mean anyone else can just.. Finish this story? 'Cause I certainly will if you want me to.
| Someone chapter 9 . 6/11/2016
Is the story adoptes yet?
Pls PM me, my fanfic account username is LeknaWorshipper
| TealBlueEyes chapter 9 . 5/3/2016
Nooooooooooooo please continue! Please!
| ProudRavenclaw2017 chapter 4 . 2/7/2016
ROFL I love this story so far. I have tears in my eyes from laughing. Keep up the good work
| GinnyWeasley chapter 4 . 1/10/2016
Say that time slows down and they don't notice that the kids are gone. In that case, do another past chapter.
| GinnyWeasley chapter 3 . 1/10/2016
Write about the boys bedroom.
| GinnyWeasley chapter 2 . 1/10/2016
In my opinion Hugo is twelve. Lily is two years younger than Al and Rose meaning she should be eleven. (This is canon)
| ronk77 chapter 9 . 9/18/2015
NOOOO YOU MUST CONTINUE! IT IS INHUMANE!