|Reviews for Where Your Gentle Wing Rests|
| ktfcoyote chapter 4 . 11/11/2013
Have I mentioned how I love and am awed by the way you think everything through? How you Woeld Build instead of just 'make it fit your kink'? How you know and explain and show how personalities and life experience work to dictate a character's actions and reactions? And how you write KawoShin so heart-meltingly beautifully? *dies*
| Literary Eagle chapter 4 . 9/3/2013
Aww, a KawoShin FAR reincarnation story! I've been wanting to see a fic about that. Yay! XD
| Princess Unikitty chapter 4 . 9/2/2013
interesting one-shot. very compelling.
| Neo Rulez chapter 1 . 8/25/2013
I don't really have any constructive criticism so that's no help there but I think this chapter was very cute. I like it so far can't wait to see what happens next
| Literary Eagle chapter 3 . 8/25/2013
I love this idea! It's nice to see Kaworu being raised by family who cares about him, as opposed to those Seele creeps. And Misato's influence certainly makes for a good explanation about Kaworu's outfit in that picture, heh. Would have been nice to see exactly what Misato's "crazy" plan was, but I'm happy they were reunited. :)
| Princess Unikitty chapter 3 . 8/25/2013
| animevampire21 chapter 2 . 7/3/2013
I didn't completely understand it (i was lost at ch 2) but it was great and cute :) good job!
| Literary Eagle chapter 2 . 1/31/2013
Heh, I liked how Rei casually refers to Gendo's bloody severed hand as "the item". I'm surprised that Misato saw Shinji as her transition guide, though. I thought it would have been Kaji.
This was an interesting idea for a fan fic, as well as a good example of how ridiculous it is to think that Kaworu in the anime had nefarious intentions. Because if he were really evil and just wanted to just mess with Shinji, he would have won as easily as he did in this fic!
| Literary Eagle chapter 1 . 1/31/2013
Oh wow, I love this! It was a great prompt, and you did a fantastic job with it. So good! I felt bad for Rei, though. I hope they eventually convinced her to join them! As for the alternate ending, it kind of made me twitch, because it doesn't feel right for it to simply stop at that point. Now that Shinji has that kind of power, I can't imagine him just sitting there and accepting what Kaworu's going to do. But aside from the alternate ending, I really adored this!
| komaeda chapter 1 . 12/11/2012
ahh this was really good! i just feel like it's kinda the stereotypical BL? like the girls are kinda a hindrance and not important at all, but i guess it's apart of the plot line that you had
but yes good work cutie!
| diabolina chapter 2 . 10/23/2012
It was quite confusing towards the end (I still don't really get it ._.) but this is definitely a beautiful story nonetheless! Hahaha all the OTP feels
| Shoumai chapter 2 . 10/13/2012
I really like this story. _ The way you handle the characters is done gently and with a lot of feeling. That being said, I would like to see more for this fic but that is entirely up to you. Thank you for writing this.
| Cyrus Lowe-Monterrey chapter 2 . 9/6/2012
Oooh, okay. That's veeery interesting. I like it. And you're right. This way is very very effective. Which make me very sad inside for the initial!canon!eva
"Resistance is adorable" *cracks up*
| yujyuu chapter 1 . 8/12/2012
Oh my gosh. This was just...aaaaaaaah(please forgive my inane fangirling) I ship Kawoshin SO HARD and this was just perfect I love the idea of a possessive and protective Kaworu, and he was just so sweet in this fic! It's just so nice to see them so happy together unlike the ending of the anime :) And Shinji is so precious, and so adorable depending on Kaworu!
I've also been reading some of your other fics and I LOVE ALL YOUR KAWOSHIN XD However most of your fics seem to have a particular scene where the characters come together (usually in Misato's apartment) and give exposition on the plot. Yes, it's welcome and clears up a lot of things, but it seems a little...I dunno...too much? It just doesn't really seem to flow with the narrative very well coupled with your tendency to suddenly drop a large chunk of exposition in the fic. Of course it's good to have have an explanation to what's going on, but maybe you could weave it in a little better?
And the alternate ending seemed a little flat because it was just a conversation. Perhaps a little bit more development to show how that scenario could play out?
Oh, and a minor little error:
""Lilim?" Misato asked, although it was the world love that was even more responsible for the raised eyebrow." 'world' should be 'word', right?
That said, I'm so glad to find another Kawoshin writer, and I love all your work, because I could never think up all of these brilliant scenarios. I hope you continue this (although it is quite complete, considering) and I'm now sold on the Shinji/Rei/Kaworu threesome because of you 8D keep it up!
| Cyrus Lowe-Monterrey chapter 1 . 8/10/2012
Oh, yes... yes! What an awesome prompt (and I've been wondering why this hasn't been done for this pair before) and what an awesome answer! (I should be jealous, but I'm really relishing the chance to read this too much... I'm lazy anyways)
And the sweetness of this is a really potent antidote to all the disturbing things Lilim brought fore (ohgodidonotneedtoknowthoseth ingsiwatchedevaat12anditisdi sturbing).
Welll... if you want a technical kind of feedback I'm afraid you're out of luck. All I can say is that I really like it, Kaworu drowning Shinji with love and the implication their immediate surrounding notices makes it feel... more real and there (i dunno how to explain it, this is just what I feel). I'm kind of of two minds about the ending, on the one hand I want to see the scenario pans out, on the other I think that it's a good place to end: when the conversion of Shinji is complete.
... You just can't resist that alternate bittersweet ending, do you? Honestly it's the one part of the fic that I feel is shaky, it hangs an feels unfinished, for an ending. It stops in the middle of conversation I know is going on (because no way Shinji is going to leave it just at that) and feels like a teaser for another part instead of a complete figment. It bothers me.
Anyway! that's my (rather unspecific and worthless) two-cent on the matter. Thank you for the really lovely bit of story