|Reviews for Who Needs Dinner?|
| Didget chapter 1 . 10/3/2012
awesome first story :) it might be easier to read the thoughts if you italic them or use quotation marks.
| LornaWinters chapter 1 . 8/12/2012
Don't ever apologize for a story, honey! I only just started writing this year, too. Everyone has to start somewhere-and, to tell the truth, this isn't half bad! I really enjoyed seeing this scene "in print," so to speak, because I got to see what their thoughts were. Very enjoyable! Keep writing-don't give up!
| yjcalvini chapter 1 . 8/9/2012
It was a nice re-cap, you should add a scene from your own imagination. Maybe they actually do have dinner later on that night, I think you should write about that too :-)